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Tabris V
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Tabris V

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He could see it in his mind’s eye as if it had been yesterday. Screams of pain, the shouts of the victorious and the dying, the white-hot agony of a fresh bullet wound in the leg, all of these sensations had melded themselves into a single memory in the old man’s mind. It had all been on the battlefield of Salzburg, where all his friends had been taken in the terrible bloodshed of that clash. All of that could be pinned on The Dictator, a man so reviled now in the continent that no one dared even speak his name. For years, the man’s armies had tramped the plains of Europe, and millions had died as a result.

Now, only with his Wellsian invention could the old man take his revenge. Now, the old man might have a chance to spare the world from The Dictator’s wrath. The aged soldier and scientist walked down a darkened street, careful to keep his weapon concealed. He had carefully selected a time-appropriate pistol, one that would not arouse suspicion.

The assassin, for that was his real identity now, he realized, came to the door of an unassuming small house. He knocked four times, methodically, and realized shortly after that he had been holding his breath until the door opened. A demure, but obviously pregnant woman answered. The lonely soldier pulled out his pistol, feeling as if time had slowed around him, and fired four shots into her belly as he watched the woman’s eyes widen. She fell back, staring at him in a shocked but fading gaze. The old man saw her die, and for the first time felt a sense of relief for the other self that he had then created. With this done, he now knew that he had accomplished his goal, here on a cold night in 1908. With this done, he turned the barrel upwards and promptly finished his mission.

10-Aug-2011 07:58:57

Tabris V
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Tabris V

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It had only begun as a minor mistake, Guthix thought, but he had been interrupted by those pesky creatures once more. He’d led a few of those apes into the world, and he had neglected to correct the subterranean pressures over by the jungle island he’d been working on. One thing had led to another, and a volcanic eruption had started to threaten the local flora. He had focus on making sure those creatures did*’t accidentally die, even as the art he was creating was being burnt underneath thousands of gallons of lava.

It was then that Guthix turned his divine power on the situation, folding the rock that was forming even then and there on the slopes of the volcano back underneath the earth to turn back into magma. Later he would realize that so much power used with partial focus was the real problem, as so much was used that some of the rock managed to become animated. Granted, they turned out well in the end, but it was because of this that Guthix learned not to take magma for granite.

10-Aug-2011 07:59:10

Borna Coric

Borna Coric

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To clarify, I will only be posting placings in this round. Authors shall have to read the stories to better judge them, and not get by with my reviews. I will discuss the stories with the contestants ingame if they wish for feedback.

10-Aug-2011 08:05:53

Tabris V
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Tabris V

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Ladies and gentlemen of the jury, I beg you to find me not guilty. I'm sure we all know I ended a story with a pun, but is that really so worthy of the death penalty?

*whispers are heard*

Oh, haha. Sorry about that. I got some speeches mixed up. here we go:




Dear esteemed judges,

It falls to me this day that I must speak to you about writing. While this may be a hard-fought contest, with some mild backstabbing and a few people intimidated into silence, it may be tempting to judge this round based on what you think of the contestants and their puns. However, this remains what it is: a writing contest. On that basis, I urge you good folks to vote for who you believe to be the best writer: a man who is both a gentleman, a scholar, and a musician, or me.

Thank you. I'll stop wasting your time now.

10-Aug-2011 08:10:57

Borna Coric

Borna Coric

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Judging:

Music Theme:
1st – Xanthian93
2nd – Nyyrikki V
3rd – Sir Lamentar (DNP)

Battle Theme:
1st – Nyyrikki V
2nd – Xanthian93 (DNP)
3rd – Sir Lamentar (DNP)

Natural Disaster Theme:
1st – Xanthian93
2nd – Nyyrikki V
3rd – Sir Lamentar (DNP)

Overall in Final Round:
1st – Xanthian93
2nd – Nyyrikki V
3rd – Sir Lamentar (DNP)


Overall in Contest (please note that this is not the final standings):
1st – Sir Lamentar (Score of 1035)
2nd – Nyyrikki V (Score of 1586)
3rd – Xanthian93 (Score of 1788)

10-Aug-2011 08:36:30 - Last edited on 10-Aug-2011 08:38:44 by Borna Coric

Borna Coric

Borna Coric

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-Special Awards-


Best Overall Score: Sir Lamentar

Most Consistent: Sir Lamentar

Most Enthusiastic: L-U-T-O

Best Story: Wintry Elf

Most Creative: Sir Lamentar and Nyyrikki V

Most Honest: Wintry Elf and Xanthian93

Most Deceptive: Nyyrikki V

Best Strategy: Nyyrikki V

Most Betrayed: Wintry Elf

Best Impact: Wintry Elf and Ogdred

Least Voted For: Archive and Sir Lamentar

10-Aug-2011 08:53:20 - Last edited on 10-Aug-2011 08:58:01 by Borna Coric

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