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WintryElf

WintryElf

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Hi everyone,

My laptop's A/C adapter and battery have stopped working. Being the laptop that I use for -everything-, this is quite catastrophic to me. The materials on my hard drive are very likely all safe and undamaged, but I am going to find both writing and posting, among many other things, very difficult for the next month or two until I can get enough money at my jobs to pay for a new laptop. It will be the hardcore gaming laptop that I'm looking at, so we're talking $1800 or so, plus shipping times after buying it online.

That makes my current position very rough. I expect I will be able to continue writing and posting, and perhaps a little ingame playing, on this downstairs Archaic Computer of Archaicness, but I just wanted to notify everyone that I'll be very inactive, save for required entries into Leb's contest and functions within the groups of which I am a part.

Thanks everyone,

Wintry

24-Jul-2011 22:51:53

Venmi

Venmi

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I am still around. I can definitely post an entry this round, and if Leb gives me early notice on what the next round is going to be, I will be able to then as well (possibly even if I don't get early notice). After that, however, I will not be a part of this anymore. I leave on August 1st, so keep that in mind. I will get my entry up soon.

~Mitch

25-Jul-2011 00:13:39

WintryElf

WintryElf

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Alright, I've completed my entry on the Archaic Computer of Archaicness, hereby referred to as 'ACoA'.

Enjoy, and good luck to everyone.

DEAD LIFE

Wintry Elf

Our fingers languidly twine together, as if in imitation of the gentle breeze that stirs your loose red locks, wreathing your delicate face with a veil of fire. The light furtively slips along your beautiful dress. It glistens almost guiltily as it slides along the folds of fabric, lending you a subtle yet blinding radiance.

We take but a moment to revel guiltily in the feeling, then we take a step, and the spell is broken.

We advance down the aisle. Together. One heartbeat echoes throughout the church.

The silence deafens us, but it is just another part of our magical moment.

A sense of urgency descends upon me. The fragile moment shattered, I start to pull upon your arm. I want us to do this.

I break into a run. You’re falling behind. I grab your hand with both of mine, and together our feet fly toward the altar.

You must be calling out to me, but the sense of urgency is increasing. I sprint for the altar, a desperate bid.

I set my foot upon the podium.

A weight falls from my hand.

I turn, but my feverish eyes see only an empty church.

I spin again.

The altar is gone. In its place rests a tombstone.

‘Catherine del Raemen,’ it reads.

“Catherine? You are my life? Where have you gone?” I cry out.

But my mind knows the answer.

She is not my life. She was my life. I made her my life.

A week ago today, her life was taken.

She took what I can never have again. Why do I remain when she is gone?

One heartbeat echoes throughout the church, and I am alone.

25-Jul-2011 02:56:40

Venmi

Venmi

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It is late and this is better than no entry, so even though it is bad, it is going up.

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Full Vacuum

Zooming past the planets, the light travels through space, penetrating the everlasting darkness. This single ray of light is the only thing that moves the darkness—that emptiness of color and the lack of visible matter. Coming from bright stars, this light gives vision to everything.

“Oh how space looks so lively here on Earth. Thousand—millions maybe?—of stars in the sky; it looks so pretty, so vast, doesn’t it? What the Gods don’t want us to understand is how empty it really is.”

“How dark is it up in space?”

“Black, the absence of color. Space seems so empty, yet the cosmos seems so full. It is quite baffling if you really think about it. How can something be so full yet so empty?”

“I don’t understand…”

“None of us do. That is the reason why space will always be a mystery. The cosmos is huge, possibly never ending. The only thing we can do is discover new things. Do you understand?”

“Yes.”

“Good, for that is all I can tell you about the mysteries of space. Good day.”

With that, the man got up and walked away.

25-Jul-2011 05:41:45

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I'm very sorry for the shortness of my entry; I have been camping for the last few days. I managed to write up a story on my iPod while away, but I only had access to WiFi for about 5 minutes. My iPod could only handle uploading a few lines at once, so before I could upload everything, I had to go. Sorry again.

25-Jul-2011 11:54:19

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