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CaptChekaka

CaptChekaka

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"Well, I don't think it's just you that tends to use Hell somewhat frequently in a story (or in a title). But you're one of the people who does it.

As for the story itself... meh, it's okay. Doesn't score very high on the originality scale with me, but you do well for what you have. You make the story just exciting enough to avoid the cliché's boredom-inducing repetition.

I hope you have some good stuff in store for us, Guard."

Is compliment.

~` Admiral Chek `~

01-Apr-2008 00:07:27

CaptChekaka

CaptChekaka

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"Doesn't score very high on the originality scale with me, >>> but you do well for what you have. You make the story just exciting enough to avoid the cliché's boredom-inducing repetition.<<<"

:D In a bit.

~` Admiral Chek `~

01-Apr-2008 00:10:22

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~Table of Contents~
Introduction - Page 1
Chapter 1 - Page 8, 10, 11
Chapter 2 - Page 18, 19, 34, 39
Chapter 3 - Page 41, 42, 49
Chapter 4 - >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Page 50,

(I will only go up to the current chapter. I won't go ahead.)

~~~

How is that NOT a compliment?

01-Apr-2008 06:16:03

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