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Slay Orc 681

Slay Orc 681

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Uvedin was quick to get up as five more natives charged in at him with spears. Uvedin again charged at the oncoming five, and twirled his rapier in an incredibly fast figure eight. The rapier greeted the first native by slashing off his arm, and then his head. Uvedin ducked low to evade a spear swipe, and then swung his legs around underneath of the native, knocking him down and making him land on his own spear. Uvedin again stabbed his rapier at the third, then over his head in a circle ending in him stabbing it into the head of the fourth. The fifth threw his forked spear at Uvedin from a small distance. Uvedin rolled to the side to dodge it, but the forked spear caught his rapier’s hilt, carrying it away.

Uvedin picked up a spear from one of the dead natives, and then beheaded the last native with it. Now, more than twelve natives attacked at once, creating a smaller circle around him. Uvedin twirled the spear above his head, then, holding the very back end, swung it around him while he ducked the sweeping motion which killed each of the natives as soon as it hit.

Now, over twenty dead bodies surrounded Uvedin. Instead of battling on mossy ground, he was now battling in a pool of blood and flesh. The natives seemed even more determined to butcher Uvedin.

03-Feb-2008 05:40:47 - Last edited on 03-Feb-2008 06:10:06 by Slay Orc 681

Slay Orc 681

Slay Orc 681

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Uvedin charged at a group of the natives in the circle surrounding him. He jumped in the air, kicking one of the natives in the chest. As he landed, he swiped twice across the chest of the native in front of him and then stabbed it behind him into the stomach of another. One of the natives struck downwards at Uvedin’s head with his spear. Uvedin held up his spear, parrying the blow, then brought the rear end down onto the head of the native.

Now, all of the natives surrounding him burst in from all directions. Uvedin dodged blow after blow, strike after strike, and slash after slash while simultaneously stabbing forward and back, and side to side with his spear.

From his hiding spot, Joran watched Uvedin battle and was amazed. ‘I had no idea Uvedin was this powerful… I have never seen anyone battle with such mastery, and while being outnumbered by over a hundred!’

Uvedin continued his dance of death, slaughtering countless natives with ease. As he battled these natives, it became more apparent to the other natives that were fighting the crew that they had a bigger problem. All fighting except with Uvedin ceased for the briefest moments, and then hundreds of natives poured in from all sides to join the fight against the juggernaut.

03-Feb-2008 06:07:26

Slay Orc 681

Slay Orc 681

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As the bodies built up and the amount of attackers increased, Uvedin slowly grew tired. His reflexes were at their peak, but no matter how many he slaughtered, three more came to replace the dead one. As the natives pressed inward like an anaconda slowly constricting its prey, Uvedin dropped his spear. He held his hands to the sky, then let out an incredibly loud shout. Fire erupted from him like a great flood, engulfing everything around. A huge beam of fire burst from Uvedin towards the sky, and then spread outwards, engulfing it as well. Then, the flaming sky, like the Envoy of Hell, burst into liquid flame which poured onto the island.

Joran screamed out as fire rained from the sky and he watched in horror as it came closer and closer. Then, as the fiery rain poured, a large bubble of energy formed around Joran, shielding him from the fire. Joran looked around for the cause, and saw Uvedin, with his hands outstretched to the sky. Uvedin’s eyes had gone completely red, almost like lava, and his entire body glowed with hate and rage.

“Impossible…” Joran said to himself as he stared at Uvedin. “Magic is a gift very few have… but Uvedin? And magic of this caliber? This is like the work of the Mage Lords of old… How?”

03-Feb-2008 06:07:46

Dudeski

Dudeski

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Well the last five were all good, but I liked the fifth the best, naturally.

One thing that stuck out at me was that Joran just kind of got forgotten during the whole fight scene with Uvedin. If he was tied up it would make sense that he couldn't run away. but it I don't see how the natives could ahve just totally ignored him when he was defenseless, and an easy kill.

04-Feb-2008 01:57:31

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