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Areno3

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-- I was unsure if this statement was directed toward those trying to get their story reviewed again by you, or just to those posting applications for the first time. Is this the problem with my application?
Beyond this I could fine nothing else wrong with my application. I'm sorry to say that I'm getting a little frustrated.

04-Jul-2012 16:16:43 - Last edited on 05-Jul-2012 06:20:00 by Areno3

Yrolg

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That's exactly what was wrong! :D

I have clarified it on the first page to mitigate the chance of this happening to someone else applying. I realise that it was not 100% clear, because the character limit forced me to cut out several words from the original sentence.
Just tag that at the end and you should be good to go!

04-Jul-2012 19:59:02 - Last edited on 05-Jul-2012 12:55:01 by Yrolg

Areno3

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—Application—
• Username: Delnaz.
• Story Title: The Highborn.
• Quick Find Code: 49-50-19-63707112
* Type of Story: Full story, unfinished.
• Length: 26 posts.
• How would you like your review formatted?: I would like the ‘critique’ review, please. Comments first, rubric second.
• May I post this review on your story's thread?: Of course. I’ll post it (if I have enough reserves) on the first page of my thread to give the readers an idea of how good my story actually is to someone with experienced editing/reviewing eyes as yourself, Yrolg.

—Application Scoring Rubric—
Literary Tools: 124/150
--Description: 37/40
--Voice: 19/25
--Symbolism: 16/25
--Depth: 18/20
--Analysis: 16/20
--Word Choice: 18/20

Structure: 106/120
--Format: 37/40
--Grammar: 27/30
--Usage: 17/20
--Sentence Configuration: 10/15
--Basics: 15/15
Plot: 75/100
--Development: 22/40 (Not fully developed as of yet)
--Intricacy: 26/30
--Consistency: 15/15
--Originality: 12/15
Other: 57/90
--Impact: 15/20
--Flow: 11/20
--Conclusion: 6/15 (Due to it being unfinished)
--Theme: 9/15
--Empathetic Ties: 6/10
--Title Relevance: 10/10
Layout: 73/80
--Introduction: 28/30
--Overall Appearance: 19/20
--Title Page: 13/15
--Chapter Configuration: 13/15

05-Jul-2012 06:20:46 - Last edited on 05-Jul-2012 19:23:51 by Areno3

Yrolg

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Delnaz,
Your application has been received and will be adjudged on July 9th. In the meantime, please remove the last two lines (especially concerning your score). This is to protect the integrity of the thread's application security measures.
I'm glad that we were able to work everything out. :)
Thank you, and good luck!
--Yrolg

05-Jul-2012 12:56:06

Yrolg

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I have decided to review both stories, since they're so short, if that's okay with both authors. There will be a few matters of housekeeping before this happens, though.
As the first priority, please make sure that your stories are posted on their own independent threads. I will not be reviewing one piece out of an anthology out of the omnibus thread in Yrolg's Reviews, unfortunately, so all reviewed stories must have a unique and propriety thread.
Do either of you have an objection to me reviewing both stories?

14-Jul-2012 15:54:32 - Last edited on 18-Jul-2012 05:28:33 by Yrolg

Yrolg

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Unfortunately the application period has closed, and it is my estimation that it will not reopen until September, at the earliest. This is subject to change, however, so please do keep an eye out on this thread and the Stories Discussion sticky.

21-Jul-2012 14:47:23

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