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Kullu00,
Hello. Unfortunately applications are not currently being accepted. Additionally, your application is incorrectly filled out. Please re-read the first pages of this thread before applying again.
You may apply again three weeks after May 4th.

Pacrat4,
Hello. Unfortunately applications are not currently being accepted. Additionally, your application is incorrect filled out. Please remember that a rubric must be attached to each application. Please -re-read the first pages of this thread before applying again. Furthermore, you have applied before your application denial period has expired. Your last application was submitted 21-Apr-2009 19:00:29. It has not yet been three weeks, 21 days, from this last application.
As a penalty for not following these instructions, your application denial period has been extended. You may apply again five weeks after May 4th.

04-May-2009 22:37:55 - Last edited on 04-May-2009 22:39:40 by Yrolg

Kullu
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Kullu

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Well, in my face for not reading through it a third time :@
Guess I'll come back with a 30-40 post story in 3 weeks then (yes, I write storys that fast)
See you then! :)
/Might check your thread once in a while\

05-May-2009 19:13:54

Yrolg

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Kullu00,
I hope that you do choose to apply again. Please also remember, however, that I maintain my right to deny a particular story because of poor quality. Writing that much content in that little time can sometimes be detrimental to quality -- I would highly suggest proofreading your piece before submitting an application.
I look forward to your next application. =)

Xanthangum,
I'm glad that you've located your errors. Please be sure to realise that when new reviews are added to the archives, certain aspects of applying may change. ;)

07-May-2009 01:58:46

Dark Enmity

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Yrolg, a question: Do you mark collections of short stories on a thread as well? Or only one long story? And if you do, do you mark all the short stories on that thread, or only one?

EDIT: I noticed an error with you scoring system.
Literary Tools: /150
--Description: /40
--Voice: /25
--Symbolism: /25
--Depth: /20
--Analysis: /20
--Word Choice: /20
--Juxtaposition: /10

Those seven areas add up to 160 for literary tools, not 150.
40+25+25+20+20+20+10=160. This should help make your scoring more accurate.

Layout: /60
--Introduction: /30
--Overall Appearance: /20
--Title Page: /15
--Chapter Configuration: /15
As well I don't know why but these four areas should add up to 80. I am starting to assume that you use some just for reference and don't count it in the layout score. Could you please clarify? If your addition was a mistake then the total I believe is 550 according to my logic.

16-May-2009 14:50:10 - Last edited on 17-May-2009 04:43:47 by Dark Enmity

Yrolg

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Kylebooker1,
Hello. As I have stated to Diescammers8, I will grade an anthology. I shall grade all stories within the anthology. If you wish for a story in the thread to not be reviewed, please either edit it out or create a new thread. =)
Additionally, as I have explained to Xanthangum, my "errors" were utterly intentional. =)I believe that I have explained this further to you in private. ;)

19-May-2009 02:14:33

Yrolg

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Pacrat4,
Hello. Unfortunately applications are not currently being accepted. Additionally, your application is incorrect filled out. Please remember that a rubric must be attached to each application. Please re-read the first pages of this thread before applying again. Furthermore, you have applied before your application denial period has expired. Your first (in this series) application was submitted 21-Apr-2009 19:00:29. It has not yet been three weeks, 21 days, from this last application, submitted 04-May-2009 06:52:00.
As a penalty for not following these instructions, your application denial period has been extended. You may apply again July 10th. Please do not apply before this date.

22-May-2009 23:36:04

Kullu
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Kullu

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Yrolg I have waited 21 days tomorrow so expect a new application soon, and this time I'll make sure to get everything right. Rules is rules after all. :P
Edit: Are you done with 'Quadmagus' or still working on it?

24-May-2009 19:18:52 - Last edited on 25-May-2009 15:43:21 by Kullu

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