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Hey man, are you open for reviews at the moment? From what I gathered from the past few pages you finished the last, but I might be wrong here so I'm just posting to double-check before submitting anything
23-Apr-2009 23:08:01
Haha ok, but in that case don't worry too much as my thread will probably die over may/june while I'm in the Caribean
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25-Apr-2009 23:26:26
Xanthangum,
Hello. Unfortunately your application is not filled out correctly and was submitted during a period when applications are not being accepted. This means that I must unfortunately decline your application.
Please also be aware that by ranking yourself highly, you are setting your expectations for my review to be high. As I am the single most critical person currently releasing reviews on these forums, I would suggest being absolutely positive that your story is impeccable before applying with such a high grade. I promise you that you shall not earn a 95% or greater (as you have awarded yourself) if you do not have a story that is of such a quality that it would be requested by a publishing editor.
Please note that I am not stating that your story is not of this quality. I only am stating that it should be of this quality if you expect such a grade.
Please feel free to reapply with a correctly written application in three weeks. =)
Hello. Unfortunately your application is not filled out correctly and was submitted during a period when applications are not being accepted. This means that I must unfortunately decline your application.
Please also be aware that by ranking yourself highly, you are setting your expectations for my review to be high. As I am the single most critical person currently releasing reviews on these forums, I would suggest being absolutely positive that your story is impeccable before applying with such a high grade. I promise you that you shall not earn a 95% or greater (as you have awarded yourself) if you do not have a story that is of such a quality that it would be requested by a publishing editor.
Please note that I am not stating that your story is not of this quality. I only am stating that it should be of this quality if you expect such a grade.
Please feel free to reapply with a correctly written application in three weeks. =)
02-May-2009 21:24:18 - Last edited on 07-May-2009 01:51:10 by Yrolg
Hello.
Username: Censor don't like my name =(
Story Title: The cresent moon
Quick Find Code: 49-50-381-58482530
Type of Story: Full Story
Length: only 9 posts so far
May I post this review on your story: Yes
Literary Tools: 37/150
--Description: 10/40
--Voice: 2/25
--Symbolism: 5/25
--Depth: 10/20
--Analysis: 5/20
--Word Choice: 5/20
--Juxtaposition: 0/10 <--- Don't even know what thet means
Structure: 37/120
--Format: 10/40
--Grammar: 10/30
--Usage: 5/20
--Sentence Configuration: 5/15
--Basics: 7/15
Plot: 15/100
--Development: 10/40
--Intricacy: 0/30 <--- why so manny hard words? don't find it in my dictionary
--Consistency: 0/15 <--- read above
--Originality: 5/15
Other: 27/90 -
--Impact: 5/20
--Flow: 5/20
--Conclusion: 0/15 <--- haven't got a conclution yet
--Theme: 5/15
--Empathetic Ties: 2/10
--Title Relevance: 10/10
Layout: 19/80
--Introduction: 5/30
--Overall Appearance: 4/20
--Title Page: 5/15
--Chapter Configuration: 5/15
Total: 135/520
Looks kinda useless from this
Username: Censor don't like my name =(
Story Title: The cresent moon
Quick Find Code: 49-50-381-58482530
Type of Story: Full Story
Length: only 9 posts so far
May I post this review on your story: Yes
Literary Tools: 37/150
--Description: 10/40
--Voice: 2/25
--Symbolism: 5/25
--Depth: 10/20
--Analysis: 5/20
--Word Choice: 5/20
--Juxtaposition: 0/10 <--- Don't even know what thet means
Structure: 37/120
--Format: 10/40
--Grammar: 10/30
--Usage: 5/20
--Sentence Configuration: 5/15
--Basics: 7/15
Plot: 15/100
--Development: 10/40
--Intricacy: 0/30 <--- why so manny hard words? don't find it in my dictionary
--Consistency: 0/15 <--- read above
--Originality: 5/15
Other: 27/90 -
--Impact: 5/20
--Flow: 5/20
--Conclusion: 0/15 <--- haven't got a conclution yet
--Theme: 5/15
--Empathetic Ties: 2/10
--Title Relevance: 10/10
Layout: 19/80
--Introduction: 5/30
--Overall Appearance: 4/20
--Title Page: 5/15
--Chapter Configuration: 5/15
Total: 135/520
Looks kinda useless from this
03-May-2009 20:00:07
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