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Devour Food

Devour Food

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main idea 11/15 Your idea was great, but a few things. One the boy in the beggining never tied back into the story, the other this simply is not runescape related.

How easy it is to read: 5/5 It was easy to read

deatails: 7/10 a few times you did not have enough details and lost clearness

Clearness: 12/20 as heard above sometimes it just was not clear

overall rating: 23/25 you came close to a perfect over all rating, if you had a perfect you would get an extra 5 points

Total: 58/75 Great story!

24-Nov-2007 00:51:50 - Last edited on 24-Nov-2007 00:52:17 by Devour Food

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