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Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Awesome name by the way
29-Mar-2010 02:57:21
Elite, I just started reading this and I just found one single typo.
I thought you'd like to fix it.
Typo Area: Between his exams to study for, college applications to fill out, his job to work and all of his after school activities... it had all taken too much of a toll on him, and he was >> exausted << and could no longer handle the stress.
-- Uh huh. You should see that error!
I thought you'd like to fix it.
Typo Area: Between his exams to study for, college applications to fill out, his job to work and all of his after school activities... it had all taken too much of a toll on him, and he was >> exausted << and could no longer handle the stress.
-- Uh huh. You should see that error!
30-Mar-2010 02:05:03
Jesus Christ... you are so much better than me. You are incredible! I have read all of chapter one and the first couple of chapter two. This is truly amazing and I can't wait to read that next bit of writing. You are magnificently talented and by dear God do I want yoru ability.
30-Mar-2010 02:21:15
You flatter me
I'm glad you enjoy the story. Some new adds should be coming soon, although I am worried that I might be 'under writing' this story. I use to have the opposite problem before I left that I was overwriting everything and being way too longwinded, but now I'm afraid that my writing is a little too simple in places and that things are moving a bit too fast.
I'm glad you enjoy the story. Some new adds should be coming soon, although I am worried that I might be 'under writing' this story. I use to have the opposite problem before I left that I was overwriting everything and being way too longwinded, but now I'm afraid that my writing is a little too simple in places and that things are moving a bit too fast.
30-Mar-2010 03:52:55 - Last edited on 30-Mar-2010 03:57:29 by Elitemage14
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