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Elitemage14

Elitemage14

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That's good to hear.

It's sad to see so many veterans have left. Strangely enough, I think I might be the oldest person still on the story forum :O . Or at least the oldest one still at all active. It's weird. It seems like only yesterday I was a little nooblet, getting flamed left and right for my writing.

Good times, good times.

21-Mar-2010 17:33:25 - Last edited on 21-Mar-2010 17:34:30 by Elitemage14

FrumpusNump

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kk then. I normally don't see any mistakes in your writing but I did notice you spelled debilitating wrong. Also he said he wouldn't be able to get the enter and exit wounds himself, but the bullet had to be removed, so where did the exit wound come from?

22-Mar-2010 21:12:45

Elitemage14

Elitemage14

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Well the idea was that the bullet went right through his shoulder without hitting bone, but that a small fragment still broke off anyway. I should probobly reword or just take that part out all together.

Thanks for reading Amor and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. You will all start to get a better idea of what's going on soon, and it's something you won't see coming ;)

22-Mar-2010 23:54:34 - Last edited on 22-Mar-2010 23:56:12 by Elitemage14

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