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Elitemage14

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Yeah, John isn't exactly your traditional hero. Thank you public schools

30-Mar-2010 21:13:05 - Last edited on 30-Mar-2010 21:16:17 by Elitemage14

Areno3

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I just read the rest of the story and I can only say one thing: truly amazing. I like how its in the future of Gielinor, because that thing is probably an ogre or hill giant - something of that sort.

30-Mar-2010 22:02:21

Elitemage14

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Thanks. I actually got the idea for that creature from the Super Mutants from Fallout 3 if you've ever played that game, but a creature like a hill giant wouldn't be far off.

30-Mar-2010 22:08:14 - Last edited on 30-Mar-2010 22:12:34 by Elitemage14

Areno3

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Yeah. Super Mutant Behemoth I think they're called in Fallout 3.

Amazing game.

30-Mar-2010 22:52:17

Elitemage14

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"So two cannibals are eating a clown, and one cannibal turns to the other and says, 'Does this taste funny to you?' "

God I love that game.

30-Mar-2010 22:55:07

38 Chaos 175

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Elitemage14, I love this story!

I would love it if you would be my mentor for the Adopt a Writer Thread.

Thanks.

Green Pie11

30-Mar-2010 23:02:38

Areno3

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You are a strange one, Elite.

Lol.

30-Mar-2010 23:16:13

38 Chaos 175

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Answer me?

30-Mar-2010 23:17:42

Areno3

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^ You are rather impatient, Green. He could be offline at the moment so calm your horses. I saw the impatient posts you made on Adopt A Writer as well.

30-Mar-2010 23:19:42

Elitemage14

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You gotta love your robotic butler Wadsworth and his wonderful jokes.

Sorry Green. I've got a project for school so my attention is sort of split right now. To answer your question, yes, I will be your mentor. Is there anything specific you want to know, or would you just like me to just start off by going to your story and seeing what criticism I can offer?

30-Mar-2010 23:20:43 - Last edited on 30-Mar-2010 23:21:36 by Elitemage14

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