Foxtrot8
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- This city is way too spread out. Tighten up the spacing between buildings. they're too sprawled out.
- maybe move the blast mine outside the city, and the alters outside the city, move the tithe farm outside the city walls.
-No city has large scale farms inside its limits, or blast mines. No city anywhere, is centered around a blast mine. make a city layout that makes sense.
-Put a wall around the city make it feel more like the other cities
- why are there dwarves here? out of place
- it feels like 5 distinct cities piled together, not one single city.
- Either separate it into 5 different cities with walls, or unify the city under one wall.
- Why is there lava in dwarf city. no one can live next to lava, lava is not hospitable to life.
- The library and greenhouse are disproportionately large.
08-Jan-2016 01:57:27
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08-Jan-2016 02:23:22
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Foxtrot8