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Kali Yuuna
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Kali Yuuna

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@Bob

Denied from my end until further revision.

My biggest gripe is Deus Ex Machina/Adrenaline Rush type stuff (understandable given the situation, but even so) You can keep so so long as the other stuff gets dealt with though.

In no specific order...

How and Why Zamorak? Considering he grew up in Lumbridge and then spent some time in Taverly, I'm confused at to how he'd get any sort of influence from the Chaos God.

Mithril? A crazed person wearing Mithril randomly attacking at the training grounds? Not even counting the rarity of Mithril, how'd this person not get stopped by Guards and what-not or at least Mentors at the place? And if Ki'tari was the one who stopped him, how did he not get stopped by other people to be praised (potential path here)?

I'm not quite certain on our stance concerning innate magics, but it likely takes much longer to cast than Runic/Powered Magic. So just a heads-up on that front. Could do a "passively gathers energy over time, heightened during stressful situations" type deal which could explain his bursts, but don't expect to pull that off in-rp without payment.

Where'd his Robes and Wand come from?
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06-Sep-2015 00:37:24

Tomb Gorilla

Tomb Gorilla

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Religion: Good idea, I'll change that.
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Guy attacking people: I'll change that XD (sorry bout that I couldn't think of anything else)
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How did he get robes and wand: Robes he does have SOME money (He can also borrow some from his friend). Imphorn wands are quite easy to craft but for the sake of realism let's say it's actually made out of an imp's horns rather than its hide. All you'd need to do is track down an imp, kill it and take it's horn(s) and then either try to make the wand yourself or take it to someone who makes things like this for a living and pay them a little money. Or ofcourse you could just buy one.
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/KINDA REALLY BADLY EXPLAINED
Am not Conor

06-Sep-2015 07:40:36 - Last edited on 06-Sep-2015 12:36:06 by Tomb Gorilla

Benthomasnac

Benthomasnac

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Username & Alternates: Benthomasnac

Character Name: Briana (or Bri) Sorenson

Age: 20

Race: Human

Alignment: Serenist

Gender: Female

Personality: Brianna

Appearance: Brianna has long, sharply cut redish hair (Ripe peach.) Her eyes are ocean blue.

History: Briana was born on a quiet summer day in the town of Neitiznot in the Freminick isles. Her father and mother ran a successful yak tanning buiesness on the isle, supplying the town and parts of Rellekka. Brianna was soon taught the family business and continued to help her family for much of her childhood. Around age 15, her father finally trusted her enough to start taking her to rellakka and abroad on his buiesness trips.

On one such trip, to Hemenster, while her mother haggled with a store owned andher father started unloading , she saw several young wizards initates doing magic at the nearby lake. She went over to watch them, having never seen magic before, as it is forbidden in the freminick isles. She became overwhelmed with awe as magic flew in front of her. Brianna eveunat*y grew bold enough to be talk to one of the wizards. However, this moment would not last. Her mother soon came by and dragged her away scolding her not letting her leave the wagon until they left. Her mother never again let her leave the island. Her father, a much more sympathic man, felt this was the wrong course of action, but could do not thing to change his wife's mind. Years passed, and Brianna made up her mind. She would leave her home, never to return to her controlling mother. She packe up a bag and, with the help of her father, who beilived this best for his daughter, helped her sail away to the main land.

When she landed on the mainland, she had only the clothes on her back and a pack of supplies, she marched her way to to the closest settlement, which happened to be a fishing colony. She worked there for a 4 months until she was albe to pay her way to a larger city.
“I will not say, do not weep, for not all tears are an evil.

07-Sep-2015 21:39:23 - Last edited on 08-Sep-2015 01:45:20 by Benthomasnac

Benthomasnac

Benthomasnac

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Continued;
When she landed on the mainland, she had only the clothes on her back and a pack of supplies, she marched her way to to the closest settlement, which happened to be a fishing colony. She worked there for a 4 months until she was albe to pay her way to a larger city.

Brianna evuantly arrived Ardougne. She stayed there, reaserching what she could to find the a magical institute to accept her. She found that the premier insitiution, the wizard tower lay on the other side of the White Wolf mountains. Unable to afford or able to withstand the trip, Brianna disparried, having forsaken her childhood home, staying miles away from anywhere she knew, and penniless. Then a kind hand touched her shoulder. An elderly wizard working at the historical archives. After telling her story to him, he offered to let her stay with him if she would help day to day as his assistant.

Brianna stay with him for several more months, learning what she could from the wise old wizard. When she was finally able to get on her feet, the elder wizard was able to help charter her a ship to Port Sarim. Leaving behind her dear friend, she embarked on the long sea voyage.

Not long after she arrived at the port, Brianna stood in the market of Draynor village, able to see her future home in the hazy distance, and knowing deep down, all her hardships.. had been worth it.

School(s) wanted: Wind (major) Herblore (minor)

Miscellaneous: Brianna is learned in the skills of sailing, leather making, cataloging, fishing, and some basic charms. (She learned some with the elderly wizard) Also, see justification for skills in history


I don't have enough room on either of these, so some things ive left blank and will explain later, or youll see.
“I will not say, do not weep, for not all tears are an evil.

07-Sep-2015 22:50:54 - Last edited on 08-Sep-2015 01:46:24 by Benthomasnac

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