A lot of my clan's traffic comes from people simply skimming through the skilling clan recruitment forum section and seeing our thread.
Things I saw on your thread that looked good are the headers, the spacing, the simplified and clear wording of things, even an index with working links; however, there are also a few things I noticed that I would change:
1. I assume red and yellow are your clan's colors, but people are really put off by red colored text - as well as that much yellow. I suggest using the yellow coloring and especially the red coloring a bit more sparsely throughout the thread, mainly as accents for headers and certain lists. White text is ok to have - it's easy on the eyes, especially against dark backgrounds.
2. The word "drama" being anywhere in the thread is a red flag for people. People associate a lot of negativity with that word and you want to refrain from making them feel anything negative (if able) when they're considering your clan. I would recommend simply starting rule 3 with "Avoid" and just cut the word Drama from that line.
3. The list on post 3, as to why people should join, should be the top half of post 1, in my opinion. Kids these days have short attention spans - so sticking out just the facts about your clan 1st is a great way to reel them in and get them to read further on. A lot of players out there become interested in a clan just from learning it has a t7 citadel. Let that information be one of the first things they see.
4. People usually only see testimonials from others if a product or service is being sold. Unless your clan is selling something then consider removing the 2 member testimonials that are posted on post 3.
5. I would align the application form to the left and number it. It makes it more obvious to people that it's a form for them to fill out. We had members who struggled with ours with their main complaint being it wasn't numbered.
That's about it as far as tips for your thread goes.
19-Jan-2017 07:21:06
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