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Enheduanna
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All of that advice is discounting the fact that there are plenty of identifying name-markers scattered through everyone's writing.

I'm fairly sure Natasha has referred to herself, even through second person, as either the Shadowforger, a Solar Exalted, a Dawn Solar, or a Lawgiver, at least once per post.

Aylss, on a back-check through the most recent few sets of posts featuring her, doesn't refer to herself by any identifying markers at all , which in itself is an identifying marker (plus she's the only one with what seems to be schizophrenia).

Agent Light is written in third person and refers to himself as Agent Light or Light at least once per post.

Duncan, while written in first person and lacking any recurring identifying markers (except, perhaps, his habit of referring to every character by their name, which he shares with Ash*in), is the only no-face to do so, which should be an identifying marker unto itself.

Ash and the prisoner have alternated between first person and third person, and, while they too don't particularly have any identifying markers, Ashlin not only has a face, but is the only poster with a face who writes in first person.

Mad guy also has a face, but he writes in third person, and mostly seems to stand around waiting for something to happen, so he's not a particular concern when it comes to figuring out what's going on (since he only really acts in reaction to other players).

I don't believe I need to tell you how to identify your own writing =P

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And thus ends Magery's impromptu lecture on how to recognise and differentiate the various Forum Fighters, and their posting styles.

I blame Wayne for it being necessary. If he hadn't decided to copy my second person (which is entirely a fault of his own, and nothing to do with me repeating, at length, "second person is best person" every time he asked if he should try using it), none of this would have happened.

28-Jan-2015 13:51:11 - Last edited on 28-Jan-2015 15:19:09 by Enheduanna

Enheduanna
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And by none of this would have happened, I mean people would have been confusing Wayne and Eno instead of Wayne and I, which would have been even worse when I started dropping into third person and then you had three of us to mix up.

So, as you can see, it's obviously all Wayne's fault.

Poor form, Wayne. Foor porm.

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My god it's been a while since I made so many posts without actually doing anything constructive in them at all.

So, without further ado, it's Nat-Nat time!

P.S I know plasma isn't a liquid, give me some artistic licence here.

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Lightning screams from the sky; always the most visually spectacular of Mother Nature's children, the fury Ash*in has called is as savage as it is devastating. After all, a lightning strike is more than just raw electrical energy - it is the heat it generates in the world around it, well over ten times hotter than the surface of your average star as it liquefies the air plasma.

Fortunately for you, in the end--for all that electrons are negatively charged--electricity is still just positive energy, and the plasma discharge is not hotter than the surface of every star. Certainly not the massive, main-sequence giant Harbinger sacrificed as a conduit to forge your Exaltation to your soul.

One absent flick of a wing reflects the bolt into your uncovered left hand, and when you snatch it out of the air, holding raw power between your fingers as if it is somehow solid, you suspect Zeus is rolling somewhere in his grave.

Though probably not.

You didn't really leave enough of him left for that.

The plasma wake washes over you like a refreshing breeze, but is it not enough to cool your rage.

You are trying to kill your oldest--and only--friend, and you do not time for games with impudent little children .

28-Jan-2015 14:29:18

Enheduanna
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The bolt crackling in your hand grows, stretching and expanding and burning as it starts to shimmer with sunlight, white lightning fading in favour of golden, star-born flame. It's not quite fire, not quite electricity; you'd say it was plasma, but what dances between your fingers, bright and sparking, is far too harsh--far too sharp --to be plasma.

In truth, you have no idea what it is.

But oh, do you know what it does .

" You dare interrupt me? " you snarl, all steel and savagery. " As if you are worthy of my attention? "

The raw energy in your hand begins to shudder, the bolt of not-lightning flexing and straining against your grip.

" Whelp! "

You take a single, furious step forward, and your wings burst outward with a thunderclap as you raise your arm high above your head.

" Know. YOUR. PLACE! "

Your left hand shatters the sound barrier into weeping, pitiful pieces as you hurl the not-lightning at the nearest clone.

When it strikes--moving at a respectable fraction of the speed of light--it is with all the force of a passing comet and all the fury of a solar flare. The clone is utterly annihilated, the sheer heat of the not-lighting shattering its molecular bonds; in other words, it undergoes total and catastrophic nuclear fission.

The not-lightning arcs outward from its primary target, riding on waves of pressure, heat, and radiation generated by the forced detonation of a person-sized atomic bomb, and the other clones are shattered into ash and nothingness.

As they die, the fingers on your left hand flicker.

28-Jan-2015 14:29:28 - Last edited on 28-Jan-2015 15:17:14 by Enheduanna

Sir Duncan88

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Enheduanna said :
Poor form, Wayne. Foor porm.


Please, please tell me that was deliberate.

Anyway, I spam liquid and solid plasma all the time, I think you’ll get away with doing it.

Also, after reading your post I think it’s time I actually did a long post. Like one of those super long posts that you guys do. (I’m usually against this in roleplaying on the grounds that it takes too much time and slows the thread. But this isn’t a role-play, is it?)

As for my first person problem, I usually prefer third person (a lot), but it just seemed more appropriate for my main character to use first person, especially since posts are normally first person on this thread. However, for the sake of convenience I will use third person.

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A look of puzzlement spreads across the pyroconjurer’s face as his fire has no effect on the assassin. However, he does manage to use the explosion to launch himself free. However, once he has summoned the phoenix armour, he finds that his opponent has already disappeared, either succumbing to Pyro’s devastating attack or escaping it. Not forgetting to keep his guard up, he nonetheless turns his attention to the scene unfolding between Ash*in and the Shadowforger.

He gives an impressed nod of approval when Ash*in’s sword changes and he summons a fierce lightning bolt to strike the enemy from above. Although it is no surprise that she shrugs off, he is completely thrown off balance when she grabs the lightning and forged it into a sword.

~Damn, I thought positive energy weakened her~ He thinks to himself.

Before the destruction unleashed upon the clones can reach Ash*in himself, he rushes forward, gliding smoothly on the hot air generated by the armour. Like a phoenix he folds the great plated wings around himself as he moves in front of his ally. Then suddenly the bright, pure flame is tainted by shadow and the whole armour turns dark.

28-Jan-2015 20:51:26

Sir Duncan88

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“Grk…” he struggles to control the negative energy, but then the wings unfold and a wave of negative flame fans out, severely weakening the attack. As if on cue, every single floating wing comes to his aid, each slotting on front of another gracefully. The burst of energy from the Shadowforger is barely deflected but does not harm either of the two fighters nevertheless.

“Augh…”
he coughs a little, as the wings move back into a floating position around him,
“I can** stand dark fire. That came in handy though. Glad to get it out of my system. Now,”


He turns back to the Shadowforger,
*Perhaps I’ll be able to fight properly.”


And he unleashes his full power.

Artfully floating on the air, he charges up, making his armour and wings glow bluey-violet again, and Wicked Battle by Revo starts playing in the background.

Every single wing collapses into one long blade and each individual quill blade.

Phoenix Flurry.


Every single blade (keep in mind it may be fire but it also has solid properties like that of metal; immunity to heat won** stop it, only immunity to fire itself) rushes in at her; each one placed exactly, so that they come from all directions, then come again, several times per second.

The Shadowforger is bombarded with hails and hails of white-hot fire-blades, hundreds of them, each at least the size of her own sword.

But, somehow, this doesn’t seem to do anything.

The blades cease their flight, and are pulled back to their owner.

“How…how do you resist everything we throw at you?”


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Not as long as I'd hoped but ti's a start. If you're puzzled about the dark fire, I absorbed dark fire earlier on and needed to get rid of it. It's earlier on, I'll find out which page it is.

...

EDIT - It's page 5

28-Jan-2015 20:54:34 - Last edited on 28-Jan-2015 20:56:34 by Sir Duncan88

Enheduanna
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Sir Duncan88 said :
Enheduanna said :
Poor form, Wayne. Foor porm.


Please, please tell me that was deliberate.


Hmm? What was deliberate?

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Sir Duncan88 said :
But, somehow, this doesn’t seem to do anything.

The blades cease their flight, and are pulled back to their owner.

“How…how do you resist everything we throw at you?”


Heh.

I can't actually tell if you realised what I did at the end of my post, and thereby deduced the next attack thrown at her would probably be countered, or if you just assumed Natasha would have been immune to the blades because reasons.

'cause the latter would be wrong XD

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Ignitheus said :
(Frankly, I enjoyed that lecture. Of course, I'm sure you didn't. I'll take your advice, and I'm assuming Pyro is in the tower?)


If I didn't want to write it, I wouldn't have written it =P

I'd say he would be. It'd be the easiest for everybody, and you can also just jump straight into the action without having to waste posts getting there XD

29-Jan-2015 02:08:55

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Agent Light strolls into a dark room, party illuminated by dozens of monitors. All of which display the fight going on back at the Tower. Some provide general overviews of the combat, while others focus on specific combatants, cycling through every possible visible spectrum at speeds the trained killer can't hope to comprehend--which is what he has a SEK*MET-class AI for.

As he reaches the plush office chair before the wall of screens, Light tosses his hat gently to a hat rack and shrugs off his coat, hanging it off the back of the chair as he sits. He looks back briefly, and pouts as he notices the hat on the floor. A brief hand gesture later, and a purposeful breeze has set it neatly on the rack's peak.

Turning back to the display, the assassin taps a quick series of keys on the keyboard in front of him. In response, a soothing female voices chimes out from surround speakers.

"User, please identify."

"Yuriel of Light, Shadow Guild Agent designate 'Light', Head of Public Relations, Head of Operations, Head of Exigency, Prime Wetboy. Authorisation code [REDACTED]."

A brief, airy melody indicated acceptance of the authorisation code and verbal input.

"Please insert SEK*MET-class aritifical intelligence, designate 'Sarah', for final identity confirmation."

Reaching behind him, the agent clutched a sliver of metal concealed beneath his hair and yanked it out with a wince, slotting it into the keyboard.

"Alright Yuriel, I'm plugged. Eighty-seven files of primary relevance to the current engagement, nine hundred and forty-four of secondary relevance. I won't even go into how many tertiary files there are."

He couldn't help the smile that tugged at his lips.

"Appreciate it. Open the primary docs, and give me some of the key footage we've gathered."

"Processing..."

Yuriel raised an eyebrow.

"Just kidding. Here we go..."

29-Jan-2015 02:56:41

Ignitheus
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(I'll just retrace back to being thrown at the wall and go from there)

Pyro flies into the wall and slams into it. After a minute passes, he attempts to get out of the dent, but the wall crumbles instead, making him fall outside. He stabs the outside wall to slow down his descent but the impact of the ground still hurts a bit. He stands and fixes his dislocated shoulder with a bone chilling crack. In irritation, the fires surrounding his body give off a menacing glow.

He scans the area for the hostiles, looks up at the hole he made. Irritated about being treated like a rag doll, Pyro pounds the floor with his scythe twice. His shadow grows and separates into two; two hellhounds appear. He speaks in ancient tongue.

The attacker left some remnants of his power. Use this to track him, though he may not be here. Go seperate directions, stick to the shadows, and don't bark. If you find someone, come back here.


The hounds find a dark enough corner, and one by one jump at it, merging within the shadows. Assuming they went off, Pyro leans by the dented wall, sits down, and sighs. The fire surrounding him turns down to a faint glow. He looks at the blade of his flaming scythe and strokes it.

I'll come back, Seraphine. Just wait a bit longer.

29-Jan-2015 07:30:43 - Last edited on 29-Jan-2015 07:40:38 by Ignitheus

Enheduanna
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Interlude: My SADIST Knows What You Did In The Dark

"Yuri-chan!"

"Praise be unto them," Yuriel says, tracing two quick circles over his chest the same way a nun might trace a cross, before turning to face the woman behind him. "Now, for the love of all that's Marcus, who let you into the anime collection again? "

"Let me? Let me!? I'll have you know that I am--" the woman says, before she is abruptly cut off by the other AI in the room.

"It was my fault, Yuriel," Sarah interrupts. "I couldn't keep her out."

"Damn straight you couldn't." The woman smirks, crossing her arms over her chest and jutting out a hip in a manner as practiced as it is arrogant. "I've been doing this since before you were even an idea in Divine Lord Magery's head, chickadee."

Yuriel sighs. One day , he thinks. One day I will figure out why I'm friends with her.

"So, Jane," he says, catching the red-head's attention, "what brings you here?"

"Are you kidding me, Yuyu? Aylss has gone crazy--or at least, a version of her has, at any rate--and the mother-flipping Shadowforger is trying to kill her? I wouldn't miss that for all the kittens in Sparkadia!"

Yuriel raises an eyebrow.

"You got me. I totally would. But you know what I mean, smart-ass."

Jane's eyes flicker over all Yuriel's displays, assimilating the information in an instant. He might need an AI to assist him, but she certainly doesn't.

It'd be kind of weird to need the assistance of an artificial intelligence when you already are one.

"Anyway!" she says brightly, "next time you head back there, take these back with you. You've been spending too much time in the presence of gods, little Light; they traced you through that when they couldn't follow your teleport."

From hammerspace--quite literally, in fact--Jane pulls out a pair of hellhounds, dangled in front of Yuriel by the scruff of their necks. Neither their heat, or ridiculous physical strength, seem to phase her.

29-Jan-2015 11:36:15

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