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Icek lunged at norzak with a sword and norzak side steped out of the way and slamed him into the inn wall.


A man steped into the inn he had red hair and tan skin.

" Sarah..? He said slightly anoyed.

Technically all the man should've seen was a flaming corpse, and pile of ash, and crying girl and a boy on the verge of death laying in a puddle of water.

But that was just assuming he had the vision of a 'normal' human.

James saw sarah dead and glared at lore. " At least one of our targets is down.

Lore didn't respond of course... even if he had the energy to he was still in shock from Sarah's death... or the hot water that had been poured on him...

Icek managed to slam norzak down and a snake bit him on the neck paralizeing him. " Noow.. Im gonna take you to zasori so she can kill you herself.. Icek laughed.


James went outside emoteionlessly.

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A few days later

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Zaku had been in a realm of light his mother looked at him in a strange way.

" You shouldnt of done that.. She said softly. "


Zaku glared at her defiently. " I Regret nothing... Lore has people that care about him.. Lily would be so alone without him.. And i couldnt let lore be twisted arond by sarah like that..

The lady seemed in thought. " If i could give you a chance to live again would you take it..?

Zaku sighed. " I kinda like it here.. No more worrys or pain just pure light.. But yes i would.. "

She nodded and chanted something. Zaku appeared outside the inn.

Zaku steped in unsure of where to start.

02-Apr-2008 21:47:58

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Lily was at the bar drinking a cup of tea, she seemed strangely quite, she tilted her head ever so slightly to see Zaku come in but she made no movement to talk to him.

Lore was upstairs in his bed sleeping.

Zaku didnt turn to look at her.

" Im going upstairs to heal him.. Then thats that.. "

"Could you... could you send him to your mother... then send him back?" Lily asked timidly. She had a pleading look in her eyes. "He's almost dead..."

Zaku bit his lip slightly.

" ill ask her.. "


He went upstairs into lores room and started chanting in angelic.

Lore looked at Zaku, his face was pale and he was wheezing. "Kill me now..." He coughed.

" It will all be over soon.. Im sorry i have to do this lore.. "


Zaku put a ice cold hand on lores neck to kill him.

When lore appeared where zaku had gone a lady looked up at him.

" So your lore huh? " She said sweetly.

02-Apr-2008 21:50:05

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The next thing Lore could feel was pure coldness then he felt fine, he felt as if he would never feel pain again, he looked up at the lady in front of him. "Y-yes I'm L-lore..." He stuttered looking around, the light was almost blinding.

The lady smirked at him.

Your the one zaku was talking about.. Well.. By you being here im assumeing you have passed on.. Now dont think you can jump off a cliff and i will bring you back anytime you want.. But i will bring you back this time if you want.

Lore looked around, it was so wonderful here... "I... I can't stay... I have to go back and take care of Lily..." Suddenly a thought hit him. "Wait... before I go... is m family here?" Lore said looking around.

The lady nodded.

" Shall i tell them your here? "

"W-would you please." Lore asked suddenly shaking with anticipation.

Lily was also shaking out of fear, she had felt Lore die.

The lady shut her eyes for a few momments then opened them and looked relaxed.

" They are here.




Zaku went downstairs still emoteionless. " Hes with her now.. "

Lore was hugging his mother before you could blink. "I miss you, all of you." Lore said, All three smiled and looked at him. "It's not his time is it?" Lore's mother asked the Lady.

Lily was still shaking. "Is... is he coming back?"

The lady sighed. " No its not his time.. Unless he wants it to be..



Zaku stared into the distance. " Thats his choice.. He said emoteionlessly.

Lore looked at the lady with a pleading looking in his eyes. "Can they come back?" Lore asked but he knew all the well that they probably couldn't. Lore's parents sighed quietly already knowing the answers, Lola had a small look of hope in her eyes.

Lily shivered. "I hope he comes back."

02-Apr-2008 21:51:31

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Zaku didnt say anything he just went outside.





The lady looked at lola.

" Your parrents time has come But.. i feal lola's time hasnt.. But i can oley bring her back with your help lore..


Lore had a look of half-happiness and half-sadness. "Anything, I do anything I can to get at least one of them back." Lore said the eagerness returning to his voice. Lore's parents smiled.


The lady smiled.

" I need you to belive with all your heart and soul that she can live again.. And she will.. "


Lore closed his eyes. "I already do." He said certainly, then he opened his eyes, he looked around, he was back in the inn on top of his bed.

There was a bright flash and Lola was sitting on the couch in the inn lobby.

Lily was stunned, she couldn't believe it. "L-lola?"

Lore's parents smiled at the lady. "Thank you." the mother said and they began to drift into what appeared to be dust. "For everything..."

The lady smiled softly and looked into a crystal ball seeing lilys reaction.




Zaku said nothing but he could sense lore and he was glad that his mother brought him back. He didnt notice lola.

Lore came bursting out of his room and took the stairs two steps at a time, and then all you could see was Lore, Lily, and Lola hugging each other, you probably wouldn't have been able to pry them apart with a crowbar at that moment.

The lady smiled and put the crystal away.



Zaku was on the porch reflecting on things.

"I can't believe your back." Lily sobbed in a happy cry. Lore was at a lost for word while Lola kept attacking them with questions about how they've been and where they've traveled.




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SECOND CHAPTER FINISHED ^_^
Done for today
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02-Apr-2008 21:53:12

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Name: Yazak Narzek. * last name unknown *

Age: He didnt count but hes still a little young.

gender: Male

Race: Werewolf


Fears/dislikes: Pain and the pack leader.

likes: Food hunting and the night.

Apperance:

Clothing:

Weapons:

job: He was planing to be a scout for thr tribes if they were to attack.

Personalty: He prefers to be on the wining side but he will be friendly to anyone that scares him. He hasnt ever had a friend before.

abilities: Long ranged attacks. Steath and hes slightly smarter then the other werewolves since he offen had to run and think to live.

History: He was offen considerd the runt of his family and he now is considerd the runt of the tribe but he wants to prove himself somehow. Ohh! A intruder.. Wow hes giveing the boss troubles.. I will show them im better then leader!

Other: His parrents and three brothers were killed by nekos. He was the oley one that lived.

how or why did you get to paradise?: He was born there.

08-Apr-2008 07:25:04 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2008 04:45:16 by Hex the wolf

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Note this doesnt have anything to do with the story but its a record for something i need to save and i dont know anywhere else to put it at the momment lol. I hope you dont mind O_O


Title: Nhoj'The'Seer
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Total Ratings: 474
Total Comments: 16
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12-Apr-2008 06:30:03 - Last edited on 16-Aug-2008 04:33:12 by Hex the wolf

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