I am so tired today
20-Aug-2010 20:18:23
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*Points to timing of previous post*
I wonder why?
I wonder why?
20-Aug-2010 20:27:24
Yeah! I agree with the above post...
Tsk tsk tsk, sleep early!
Tsk tsk tsk, sleep early!
20-Aug-2010 20:35:47
I've now read the whole story. English, you have written a deeply moving and thought provoking story that really makes you think about how much your actions can affect others. Certain parts really bring tears to your eyes, for example, the letter from Tyler.
It is arguably one of the best stories I have ever read on these forums.
It is arguably one of the best stories I have ever read on these forums.
20-Aug-2010 20:56:46 - Last edited on 20-Aug-2010 21:33:27 by Ghastrage718
Not sleeping early + the fact that I did quite a bit of heavy-lifting today...lol
Thank you so very much for reading this, James. Congratulations! You're the first one to finish the whole thing! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope it wasn't too disturbing (or mind defiling) for you
Thank you so very much for reading this, James. Congratulations! You're the first one to finish the whole thing! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope it wasn't too disturbing (or mind defiling) for you
20-Aug-2010 21:56:05
Nah, I've already read a few of your stories, so my mind had already been defiled, and I knew what to expect
Not TOO disturbing...
I seem to remember a short story about some ants...
Not TOO disturbing...
I seem to remember a short story about some ants...
20-Aug-2010 22:21:28 - Last edited on 20-Aug-2010 22:23:25 by Ghastrage718
Really?
Still, I would love it if you could give me a little more feedback about what you liked, what you hated, and so on.
Meh - I hope the content of this story surprised you from what was suggested by the title!
And yes, I did write a story about some ants
(and proud.)
Still, I would love it if you could give me a little more feedback about what you liked, what you hated, and so on.
Meh - I hope the content of this story surprised you from what was suggested by the title!
And yes, I did write a story about some ants
(and proud.)
20-Aug-2010 22:26:52
I'll go back and re-read it then
I did sort of guess what the story would be like from bothe the title and your previous stories
I liked the questions at the end of the story that really make you think.
I did sort of guess what the story would be like from bothe the title and your previous stories
I liked the questions at the end of the story that really make you think.
20-Aug-2010 22:32:37 - Last edited on 20-Aug-2010 22:34:15 by Ghastrage718
Did you read, or skim it?
But then, after the insights of the epilogue, maybe it'll add a new layer to everything you've read before...?
But then, after the insights of the epilogue, maybe it'll add a new layer to everything you've read before...?
20-Aug-2010 22:36:22
Exactly
I read it properly, but I like to go back and read the story again to see if I missed anything. Plus, after reading the epilogue, sometimes things seem clearer and make more sense.
I read it properly, but I like to go back and read the story again to see if I missed anything. Plus, after reading the epilogue, sometimes things seem clearer and make more sense.
20-Aug-2010 22:39:06 - Last edited on 20-Aug-2010 22:43:50 by Ghastrage718
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