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Hurricaneria
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Hurricaneria

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I was going to be a father! I couldn't believe it! It was such an exciting thing to find out. And plus, I knew where I could find Anna now that she couldn't fight or practice skills anymore until the baby came. I was so proud of myself the next day. My friends started to come up to me and say, well, boy comments like, "Yea boy! You got it ON!" and "What a way to lose your state of Virginia son!"
I got to admit, I had a great time, but it kind have hurt though because my friends didn't see the real side of the happiness that I'm going to have a child and it happened out of true love, not because I just got busy with a girl and it was just an amazing time. But what ever, boys will be boys, and I can't say I'm not one of them.
I started to head for Lumbridge after a few drinks and I came across a small building. I went to check it out, but the door was locked, so I knocked to see if anyone was home.
"State your Quest Points," someone immediately stated.
"Uhh..." I took out my license, "37 Q.P.?" I heard clicking behind the door.
"Come in," the man said.
I walked in to find a very fancy dressed man sitting at a table in the room. "Hello sir!" he said.
"Hi, how are you?" I said.
"I'm wonderful! Pleased to meet you! I am the guild master here at the Champions Guild," he said, "If you need any high leveled metal armor, you can go upstairs to the merchants and they'll help you.
"Thank you," I said.
"Excuse me, do you have the time guild mate?" said a British accent.
I turned around to find a tall and fairly well muscular man at the door. He had wild spiked crimson hair, pale skin, and scarred legs with tattered pants, a blue vest over a white shirt, grey shoulder pads, black shoes and grey gauntlets. He then took out an eye patch from his pocket and placed it over his right eye.
"Do you have the time?" he said.
"Oh, I'm sorry, I don't."
"Ahh, it's alright mate. I'm Sven, but you can call me Peachy," he said in a pirates voice.
"Hey Peachy, nice to meet you," I replied.

29-Oct-2009 21:00:46 - Last edited on 05-Nov-2009 03:59:07 by Hurricaneria

Hurricaneria
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Hurricaneria

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"What's your name laddie?" Peachy asked, as the guild master took a gulp of his beer.
"I'm Hurricaneria-" the guild master choked on his beer and looked at me.
"Hurricaneria? THE Hurricaneria from the Crandor attack?" he asked.
"Yes sir."
He gave his beard a tug and looked closer into my eyes, "I...I think I may have some, "news" for you."
"Sir?"
He cleared his throat, "Well, Elvarg the Dragon, who currently lives inside the caves of Crandor, needs to be...well...taken care of," my heart started racing with anger, "If you're up to it, go talk to Oziach who lives in Edgeville, he'll brief you."
I took no chance, I rushed out the door, but Peachy caught me before I went out, "No! Wait! You're gonna need some help there lad with that dragon of yours," I didn't listen to him, I tried to walk off, "No me boy, gather up your friends first, then meet me at Oziach's in 1500 hours."
What ever, I thought, I'd better make it quick.
I headed to the blue moon inn, and found my friends hanging out there, as usual.
"Guys."
"Hurri! Come over here and have a drink!" Kung shouted.
"No guys, I-"
"Aww come on Hurri! Just one-"
"No! Listen to me!" the bar got silent, "Elvarg the Dragon is still at Crandor living off of it's remains, and I need you guys to help me out!"
"Elvarg?!" the bartender shouted.
"Well? You guys in? Or are you not my true friends?"
The gang looked at each other, and Knight then spoke out, "Hell yea Hurri! Let's take back our home!" The rest of the crowd started cheering us on.
"Hurr!" Anna called out.
"Anna, I have something to tell you."
"I know, please don't do this, you'll get killed and you won't be here anymore to support me."
I gave her a kiss on the lip, "Don't worry, I'll be fine," she looked into my eyes, "I was asked to do this by a...private client you might say."
"Hurri..." she spoke as she felt my cheek.
"I'll be fine," I said as I kissed her again.
"Listen up everyone! We are Crandorian survivors, and we're going home to avenge our massacre tonight!"

05-Nov-2009 03:53:25 - Last edited on 05-Nov-2009 03:53:42 by Hurricaneria

Hurricaneria
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Hurricaneria

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Hey, I can have my own imagination right? Besides, I didn't make the character, it was from a bio.
§Hurricaneria, hates the Rich§
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05-Nov-2009 16:55:11

Xifang Baihu
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Xifang Baihu

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nice way of rallying the troops. i also have a few thing to comment on.
1.) if i'm thinking right, it's likely to be Hurri that takes Elvarg's head while all the others keep her busy and wear her down to low HP.
2.) perhaps special techniques for each charactor depending on what weapon they're using like if they're using a bow, it's different than if they're using a scimitar.
3.) some sort of song or battle-cry that they all do as they prepare and head out, right up until the moment they engage in battle with Elvarg.
these are just ideas but i could give a few suggestions on 2 & 3 if you like them.
on a side note; i've determined Peachy's race: Were-elf. mother, elf. father, werewolf.
Peach38,
Keeper of Guthix's Faith.

05-Nov-2009 23:38:11 - Last edited on 08-Nov-2009 02:14:34 by Xifang Baihu

Hurricaneria
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Hurricaneria

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Sound good to me :)
§Hurricaneria, hates the Rich§
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(¯`•._)X¡þrõþê, †Hê Gø†hí© GÃñGš†Èr(¯`•._)
¨-...-¨ÑùmþÈr II õƒ Örgáñí£á†îøñ XIII¨-...-¨

21-Nov-2009 09:29:45

Xifang Baihu
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Xifang Baihu

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ok, here are just a few ideas/examples to expand on 2&3:
when it comes to battlecries and the like, can't get much better than Sons of Odin or Gods of War, both by Manowar or Pillar's 'frontline'.
on special techniques: well, it depends on the weapon and the one wielding it.
for Peachy, i thought if he was using a high level bow, preferably some kind of longbow, a special attack that made crystal form around where the arrow hits would be good. the name 'Crystalline Interdiction' sounds good in my mind.
if he was to use his rune scimitar, the technique would definately be different; maybe a spinning chop that called upon a powerful wind spell would be kinda fun.
these are just ideas that help illustrate my point. if you don't feel like using them, that's a-okay with me since i'm just trying to give feedback and bring a few interesting ideas to the board.

25-Nov-2009 23:47:12 - Last edited on 26-Nov-2009 23:53:29 by Xifang Baihu

Hurricaneria
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Hurricaneria

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Oziach, a bit of a nasty fellow if you ask me. I still remember the tone of his voice as I walked in his small home situated right next to the wilderness ditch; he had a weak French accent with a rude personality, and he would wave his hands all over the place as he spoke. He had short-cut brunette hair with a Salvador Dali mustache and wore a rune plate body with purple trousers. You could see his coldness as you walked into the room, so quick to anger and no sign of sympathy.
As I walked into the house, while I still carry my resentment toward my past, ***ach turned around from his desk and stood up to examine me.
"You don't deserve any of my work, go away Crandorian," he finally spoke.
"I'm not here for your art trash, I'm here for advice on Elvarg the Dragon," I replied.
"I don't care if your baby Saradomin or Zamorak, you have no right to enter my home without my invite."
"What about an invite from the guildmaster at the champians guild?" I said with a deviling smile.
"Speak."
"We are Crandorian survivors, and we're heading to Elvarg to avenge our massacre."
He threw a key at me, "That's to Melzar's Maze, it's south of the crafting guild," I looked in awe at the key, "The next map piece is in the possession of an oracle at ice mountain, and the final piece belongs to the goblin generals at the goblin village north-east of Falador."
"Dude, slow down!" I barked, "Look-"
"Silence! I am not finished!" he barked back, "You need an anti-dragon shield to block the dragons fire breath, and you're going to need a ship to get to the island."
"Will you shut up and listen to me!" I yelled out.
"Hurri, come on, I wrote it all down already," Kung said.
"Leave my home, now! You have wasted my time already! Leave!"
What ever, your an ass anyway, I thought.
"Hurr, I'll get us a ship, there's one for sale in Port Sariam," Knight said, "I'll even throw in the repairs along with the cost, Elvarg is going down."
"I know an old friend named Ned, he can pilot our ship," said Vince.

21-Jan-2010 20:40:19 - Last edited on 31-Jan-2010 05:02:14 by Hurricaneria

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