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Xifang Baihu
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Xifang Baihu

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Name: Sven but his good friends, especially female friends, call him either Peachy or Peachy-keen.
Age: unknown
Race: also unknown but rumored to be a hybrid
Gender: male
Weapon: Rune Scimitar, Granite Mace, or Gadderhammer.
Armor: Temple Knight Prosylete set (no helm).
Appearance: wildly spiked crimson hair, pale skin, tall but fairly well muscled, scarred legs, tattered pants, blue vest over white shirt, grey shoulder pads, black shoes and grey guantlets. occasionally wears an eyepatch to look cool.
Profession: adventurer and mentor to other heroes/adventurers.

Short History: born in Taverly to loving parents, species unknown as of yet, he was raised to worship Guthix but felt drawn to the Elven deity Seren for reasons unknown. the other druids accepted his slight difference in beliefs because it was Guthix's will to accept all things that brought balance but he still felt left out of a lot of things. when he turned fifteen, he left Taverly with his father's old scimitar and wooden shield to seek his fortune. upon completing a few small quests and training his non-combat skills, he became a fairly good 'item-aquirer' as he styled himself but others just called him the agile finder because, however long it took, he always got the item for whatever he needed or had been paid to get. he's also got a lot of useful connections to some important groups through out the wolrd but some of them are a bit tenuious from time to time.

((i tried to make him interesting and leave his race open to be determined at a later time in case that's ok.))

16-Sep-2009 04:18:31 - Last edited on 17-Sep-2009 03:53:13 by Xifang Baihu

Hurricaneria
Nov Member 2023

Hurricaneria

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I was actually waiting on someone else to post before I said anything about that application, but I found a part for you in the story a long time ago. You should be featured in the next chapter soon, which I think will be a big turning point in the story, so...congratz!

§Hurricaneria, hates the Rich§
(¯`•._)Mëmbër×Ïñ×Wrî†êrš×Õƒ×Rûñë§cåpë(¯`•._)
(¯`•._)X¡þrõþê, †Hê Gø†hí© GÃñGš†Èr(¯`•._)
¨-...-¨ÑùmþÈr II õƒ Örgáñí£á†îøñ XIII¨-...-¨

14-Oct-2009 20:31:05

Hurricaneria
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Hurricaneria

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Instead of encouraging me to write more, I'd LOVE to hear about my latest chapters...

§Hurricaneria, hates the Rich§
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(¯`•._)X¡þrõþê, †Hê Gø†hí© GÃñGš†Èr(¯`•._)
¨-...-¨ÑùmþÈr II õƒ Örgáñí£á†îøñ XIII¨-...-¨

26-Oct-2009 20:57:33

Skirrie

Skirrie

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if feedback is what you want, it is what you will get.
I like how it reminds me of when I was working day and night in the dwarven mine. doing quests here and there.. endless possibilties.

though I think you were going through those quests awfully fasts. perhaps a bit more detail next time :P

btw I can't wait to see what your responce was when anna told you. *encourage* *encourage* :P

26-Oct-2009 23:10:57

Xifang Baihu
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Xifang Baihu

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personally, i enjoy the story over all but the quest bits do seem to vary in length. maybe throwing in some of the charactor's thoughts while doing more menial quests would make it more interesting.

also, i do enjoy the whole idea of Hurri and his friends interacting but maybe you might want to include them in some of your quest adventures or some such idea (like in the Heroes Quest or when you all go to slay a big-time boss monster).

i like the love story between Hurri and Anna but i think i know a way for the charactor i made to be helpful, if you haven't already thought of it; making/getting the wedding rings for them. just a suggestion, mind you.

these are some thoughts i have on the story thus far and i'd be happy to share more in the future if i feel that they're worth sharing.

27-Oct-2009 01:02:02 - Last edited on 27-Oct-2009 02:02:45 by Xifang Baihu

Hurricaneria
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Hurricaneria

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A great idea peachy for a wedding as such :)

Unfortunately, the "wedding" part might be until the end of the story, I'm sorry, it WILL be at the end of the story, because of some other great ideas that conflict with it being earlier in the story.


§Hurricaneria, hates the Rich§
(¯`•._)Mëmbër×Ïñ×Wrî†êrš×Õƒ×Rûñë§cåpë(¯`•._)
(¯`•._)X¡þrõþê, †Hê Gø†hí© GÃñGš†Èr(¯`•._)
¨-...-¨ÑùmþÈr II õƒ Örgáñí£á†îøñ XIII¨-...-¨

28-Oct-2009 19:41:53 - Last edited on 05-Mar-2010 22:05:38 by Hurricaneria

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