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Dreamweaver
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I'm not sure that anyone's arguing that grammar should be *sacrificed* for readability, only that minor grammatical errors in an otherwise readable piece are not such a bad thing.

Of course we should all be striving to improve our craft as we write, and that includes trying to improve our grammar. But practically speaking, even the finest of published works are not flawless in this regard. So to demand virtual perfection in grammar is -- in my opinion -- an indication of the misinformed standards-setter.

Well that came out to be a little more convoluted than I'd imagined. So much for campaigning for clarity of prose, eh?

But my point is this: I believe that grammar is so often picked up on by people trying to demand perfection in their particular guild because -- on the surface at least -- it appears more quantifiable than plot, use of metaphor and so on. Who would dare start a club that accepted only works with perfect character development? Is grammar an exception?

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07-Sep-2007 05:40:14 - Last edited on 07-Sep-2007 05:44:07 by Dreamweaver

Maia Smith

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It's true, grammar doesn't *need* to be sacrificed for readability. However, I did not see *anyone* here claiming that we *must* sacrifice grammar to make things readable. Like I'd really go around saying: "Join me, grammar must die for the greater good!"

Thank you for calling me illusioned and misinformed. ^_^

While it is true I have seen authors "wriggle" when correcting their grammar and make excuses not to correct it based on "readability" or even "effect," that does not mean that crying "readability" is always an excuse.

(Did you see how I totally avoided a contraction there to place emphasis on the "not"?)

Dream said it all. I'd just like to add this:

I have yet to find a book that I am convinced is 100% grammatically perfect. But do those things actually affect the quality of stories?

No.

Look at it this way, the arguments we've had over commas before coordinating conjunctions and semicolons.

Does the fact that Americans have different rules for commas make any real, true difference to the quality of their writing?

No.

Does the fact that Americans have different rules about semicolons make any real, true difference to the quality of their writing?

No.

But the point is, as Dream said, does a single missing comma really matter so much that you would deny a good piece of writing over it?

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07-Sep-2007 15:08:59 - Last edited on 07-Sep-2007 15:38:35 by Maia Smith

Dreamweaver
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I don't believe Torpy was trying to insinuate that you or I are illusioned and misinformed, Maia. I think it was more of a general observation of people that try to play the 'readability' card when answering to grammatical inaccuracies.

So I think we do actually have a general consensus here: Grammar is important and should be utilized as correctly as possible to benefit one's writing. But it will no more reach absolute perfection than any other creative aspect of that author's work.

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07-Sep-2007 22:08:51

Maia Smith

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I know.

I'm just sayin' there might be times when the deliberate misuse of grammar is acceptible. It's misuse need not be "only an advantage to the illusioned and the misinformed."

Like, I'll deliberately misuse grammar for effect.

07-Sep-2007 22:50:37 - Last edited on 07-Sep-2007 23:21:59 by Maia Smith

Citizen Meme
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I agree with Maia on the last post. But, I mean, it's got to be legable and still excellent. For even if its understandable, I don't think the greatest of the great would have to many...


Anyway, forget I said anything. I didn't mean this to turn into a spam-war, especially on such a good story's thread.

07-Sep-2007 23:03:42 - Last edited on 07-Sep-2007 23:03:52 by Citizen Meme

Maia Smith

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Matt5327
07-Sep-2007 23:03:42
Last edited on 07-Sep-2007 23:03:52 by Matt5327

Anyway, forget I said anything. I didn't mean this to turn into a spam-war, especially on such a good story's thread.
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This... is not a spam war. It's a discussion on grammar, which, while inspired by, doesn't have a whole lot of relation to your post (no offense). So forgetting you said anything won't take back any of the points I wanted to make about grammar. I'm just trying to say this is not your fault. If anyone's at fault it's me.

Anyway. It seems I must once again apologize for off-topiccing and spamming, so I'm sorry about that.

07-Sep-2007 23:20:22 - Last edited on 07-Sep-2007 23:28:10 by Maia Smith

Dreamweaver
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Why's everyone apologising on this perfectly good debate real estate? As far as I'm concerned, the more people that come here and use it as a place of discussion, the more people may actually notice the story that's sprawled all over the first few pages here. :)

So keep the debate going (unless you're already finished, that is). No apologies are necessary!

By the way, I absolutely advocate misusing every literary device known to writer-kind when it's effective to do so. But I would probably caution to less seasoned authors that "less is more" with such techniques, and that it helps to know the rules before you break them. :)

On a semi-related issue, I recently picked up a book in a local bookstore that was totally bizarre. You could read it from both ends, meaning you could open it up, and read one story from page 1 to page xxx at the end. Then you could close the book, flip it over, and open it from the other cover (which also looked like a front) and read from *that* page 1 to the end again.

Both stories were intertwined and related in subject apparently, so the intended approach of the author was to have the reader constantly flip from one to the other. There were also loads of notes in the margins, and -- for some reason -- every 'e' in the book was printed in tan brown, not black.

I can't remember the name of it because I didn't buy it. It was heralded (needless to say) as a "complete reinvention of the novel," but to me it looked like an unnecessarily complex headache! Still, if that made it into print, there's no accounting for taste, even among oterwise-respectable publishing houses. :)

Dreamweaver

08-Sep-2007 00:33:33 - Last edited on 08-Sep-2007 00:34:03 by Dreamweaver

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This will make some smile, and horrify others (Torpeh).

European Commission has just announced an agreement whereby English will be the official language of the European Union rather than German, which
was the other possibility.


As part of the negotiations, the British Government conceded that English spelling had some room for improvement and has accepted a 5- year phase-in plan that would become known as "Euro-English".



In the first year, "s" will replace the soft "c". Sertainly, this will
make the sivil servants jump with joy.


The hard "c" will be dropped in favour of "k". This should klear up konfusion, and keyboards kan have one less letter.


There will be growing publik enthusiasm in the sekond year when the troublesome "ph" will be
replaced with "f". This will make words like fotograf 20% shorter.


In the 3rd year, publik akseptanse of the new spelling kan be expekted to reach the stage where more komplikated changes are possible.


Governments will enkourage the removal of double letters which have always ben a deterent to akurate speling.


Also, al wil agre that the ***ibl mes of the silent "e" in the languag is disgrasful and it should go away.


By the 4th yer people wil be reseptiv to steps such as replasing "th" with "z" and "w" with
"v".


During ze fifz yer, ze unesesary "o" kan be dropd from vords kontaining "ou" and after ziz fifz yer**** vil hav a reil sensibl riten styl.


Zer vil be no mor trubl or difikultis and evrivun vil find it ezi tu understand ech oza. Ze drem of a united urop vil finali *** tru.


Und efter ze fifz yer**** vil al be speking German like zey vunted in ze forst plas.


If zis mad you smil, pleas pas on to oza pepl.

08-Sep-2007 05:28:59

Orbestro
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Ah Die, that made me more than smile! I was thinking it was a good idea until about halfway through, when it started looking like a preschooler writing.

Hmm...I'm all debated out on grammar. I've never been good at such things. Goodnight all ^_^

~ O_o rbie
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through and through.

08-Sep-2007 06:25:30

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