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Chapter 3: A Battle Awaits
The night stars glittered, the moon shined down a light to fight off the coming tide of war. The Rebel Army of Lumbridge set up camp 2 miles outside Varrock's west gate. A few are sound asleep while Jikvald, Seperadith, and Reid stay on night watch. Suddenly, a bush in-front of them began to shake. The three jump on their feet and grab onto their sword handles and remain on the state of caution. A deer jumps from out of the bush and runs away, the three sighed a sigh of relief and sat back down. In the morning, they started to travel again, the sun bared down with heat. "Man, I cannot take this any longer. I am sick of this heat.." Frederick complained "Ever heard of not wearing a long sleeved robe during the harsh days of Summer?" Nero said. "Hey Jikvald. Are you sure you're going to be alright? I mean-" Stephanie worried about Jikvald.
"Yes, yes, yes. I'll be fine, don't worry." Jikvald replied. Though Frederick continued to complain about the heat, the group continued to walk. After hours of walking, a noise caught Seperadith's attention, it was the cry of a beast. Seperadith tightly holds onto his Custom Elemental Staff and shuffles his eyes left and right, looking for the source of the sound. The sound got louder and louder and it began to sound more like a growl rather than a cry. The beast jumps out from hiding and everybody turns behind them, it was a Dziban but something appeared wrong with this Dziban. "Who ever heard of Dzibans in the afternoon!?" Frederick shouted.
"RRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!" The Dziban roared. "Jikvald, Reid. Let's go." Seperadith said, he launches a Fire Wave at the Dziban. It hit the Dziban and it affects the Dziban a lot. Jikvald impales the Dziban through it's heart and Reid impales his axe in the Dziban's head, the Dziban falls onto the ground and dies.
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Jikvald looks on in confusion. "That's strange. This Dziban looks like it's just been through a fight with someone or something with a sharp blade and I believe it was killed not by it's wounds but by some type of poison." Jikvald looked puzzled but nevertheless they continued to walk forward. After a few hours, it was dusk and the group is on a hill and can see the camp crystal clear. "We've made it. We're here." Frederick said. "Yes. Now the battle for the Ebony Key begins." Jikvald said. The area was very bright due to all the torches everywhere. In the camp, Cameron begins to feel very strange, he feels more tense than he normally is, he begins to wonder. A Zamorakian Knight walks into Cameron's Tent.
"General Cameron. There's no enemies around so I don't know what is causing your problem sir." The Zamorakian Knight reported.
"There has to be something. I can smell new blood walking here as we speak." Cameron raised his voice.
"I assure you. We've checked all around the area and there-." Cameron clenches his fists and quickly turns his head, facing the knight. He glares at the knight as he walks up to him, the knight begins to feel intimidated by his vampire general.
"G-G-G-General C-C-C-Cameron...I.." Cameron quickly grabs the knight by the throat and grabs it tightly, the knight begins to choke.
"Are you calling me a liar!!?" Cameron's grip tightens with every passing second.
"Answer me!" Cameron continued to shout at the knight. The knight slowly shakes his head left and then to the right, Cameron throws him onto the ground after seeing him shake his head side to side. Scared for his life, he ran away from Cameron. A lady walks into Cameron's Tent, Cameron looks at the lady. "What is it Enyo?" Cameron said. "I do believe you General Cameron. It must be those soldiers from The Rebel Army of Lumbridge." Enyo replied. Cameron's eyes widen for some odd reason though Enyo continued to talk since she can't see Cameron or his face expression.
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"I remember that blood's scent." Cameron mumbled. Cameron began to have flashbacks of the day to smelled that scent. "Huh?" Enyo said in confusion, Cameron runs outside and heads for where he smells the blood scent at it's strongest point. "W-Wait!" Enyo shouted as she ran with a few soldiers after Cameron. He begins to hear faint whispers in the distance, he follows where the scent of blood is and where these faint whispers are coming from. After a few minutes of running, he sees the Rebel Army of Lumbridge in-front of him and Enyo.
"Where are we? Why did you stop?" Enyo moves her head around in the confusion since she is unable to see due to her blindness.
"Cameron?! Enyo!?" Frederick shouted, Enyo quickly turns her head to where she heard the voice come from.
"Okay, now I know." Enyo replied. Cameron eyes widen at the sight of where the source of the scent of blood was coming from. It was coming from the blood on Stephanie's bandages from the previous battle with Zaros' army and with The Army of the Altais. His clenched fists are released and looks at Stephanie.
"Catherine..." Cameron mumbled. Stephanie looks at Cameron and has a flashback of the man who raided her village and killed everybody she knew back when she was a small child calling her by the name Catherine. Stephanie clenches her fists and her face expression is of angry and she stares at Cameron with pure hatred. She pushes everyone out of her way and stops 1.5 feet away from Cameron.
"Catherine, I've looked everywhere for you and now you're here and I'll never let you go." Cameron puts his left hand on Stephanie's left shoulder. Stephanie throws Cameron's hand off of her.
"You monster..!" Stephanie shouted as she punched Cameron's right cheek with her right hand. A tear falls down from Stephanie's left eye, she punches Cameron again only it was with her left hand.
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More tears began to fall from Stephanie's eyes, she stops punching Cameron and she downs her head with a sad look upon her face."It's okay Catherine. I understand you're probably angry at me because I killed our clan but I swear I'll fix my mistake and make you happy." Cameron smiled. Seperadith and the others begin to feel disgusted at the sight of Cameron. Stephanie still does not respond to any of Cameron's words. Suddenly, Frederick shoots a Air Wave at Cameron, Enyo hears the attack coming and quickly moves behind Stephanie and blocks the attack off.
Enyo charges at Frederick and the two begin to fight. "Men, attack!" Enyo commanded as she fought Frederick. The Zamorakian Knights charge towards the remaining group of The Rebel Army of Lumbridge but these knights are easily taken care of. Suddenly, Cameron begins to hear screams of fear coming from his camp and a strong smell of fresh blood. Down at the camp, it was a massacre with bodies and blood covering most of the ground. Thanatos kills everybody he sees, he looks to the left and pauses and sees a Zamorakian General looking straight at him. Thanatos turns his attention to this man, a demonic looking sword is summoned into the hands of this general, he grasps his right hand upon the blade's handle. The Zamorakian General calmly awaits Thanatos to make his move, Thanatos remains focused.
"I'm assuming you're looking The Ebony Key." The man said to Thanatos.
"How would you know?" Thanatos questioned the man.
"Your name is Thanatos Dunamis therefore you're with The Army of the Altais. Of course you would be after the key."
"You're smarter than you look."
"Heh."
"What about you? You don't look human rather you look like a demon."
"You're smarter than you look." The half-demon races towards Thanatos he jumps into the air and strikes Thanatos, he blocks this attack with his left forearm, the demon general jumps back.
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Thanatos began to feel a sharp pain after he blocked that attack. He grabs his left forearm and sees a huge wound with a lot of blood dripping out. He realizes that this is the first time in many years that he is experiencing true pain. His breathing increases and begins to pant faster, he looks at the half-demon. "I guess I underestimated your abilities. I'll have to go all out in order to correct this mistake." Thanatos said as he clenched his fists. His teeth grew larger, his entire body grew taller and more muscular, his claws grow 3x as big as they once were, and finally Thanatos' eyes glows pure red. "RRRRRAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!" Thanatos roared. Cameron heard this roar, and now knows a Dziban has raided his camp and he knows his general can handle it and he believes this firmly. Cameron looks back at Stephanie, he moves his left hand on her left shoulder.
"Catherine...are you alright?" Cameron asked. She still did not respond. Seperadith quickly looks back at Cameron and Stephanie.
"Her name is Stephanie not Catherine!" Seperadith shouted as he shoots a Air Wave at Cameron. Cameron quickly looks at Seperadith with a glare and with pure hatred in his eyes.
"Don't you dare interfere!!" Cameron shouted as he slashed his Rapier at the Air Wave, still it pushes Cameron and Stephanie away nearly off the hill side.
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"Get away from her Cameron." Seperadith growled. He quickly transforms his staff into his Saradomin Sword.

"You dirty little peasant. How dare you attack me and Catherine, I'll make you my slave now!" Cameron yelled, Cameron looks at Stephanie and kisses her on her left cheek, Stephanie eyes widen and she shakes.

"Don't worry, my dear Catherine. I'll protect you from this jealous scum and be back with you as soon as I'm done." Cameron whispered to Stephanie. He looks at Seperadith with pure disgust. Cameron points his Rapier at Seperadith, Seperadith remains focused, ready to fight to the death.

Indeed, a huge crossfire was approaching.

The End of Chapter 3
Next Chapter,
Chapter 4: Crossfire

Thank you for reading, I appreciate it ^_^

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another awsome chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i see arad has arrived and he has began fighting on the first chapter he is in

01-Dec-2008 16:37:58

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Awesome even if Ravinius and Mercutio never appeared in it (I'm assuming they're off doing evil and good respectively) And there were very few errors in this chapter but I'll list the one I found:
" "You're smarter than you look."." Strange double quotes, looks like a sentence was removed but the period was left there.
Also somewhere you said "fro" instead of "from" but I can't locate it so don't worry about it.
Raphael Quotes:
Faust: Now let's let the host meet his host. Hee Hee... Get it because... Oh wait, you don't know yet do you?
Raphael: Know what? Who is this Vexxazrin?
Faust: Vexxazrin is an Elder god.
Raphael: An Elder god... I thought they left millenia ago.
Faust: They did, Vexxazrin was just... well he was incapactiated at the time.
Raphael: I don't understand.
Faust: Well Vexxazrin was one of the weakest of the Elders, but he was quite the ambitious fellow. He wanted to become the most powerful of the gods, rule the world yadda yadda yadda, and so he designed a weapon that could steal the powers of a god. It was called...
Raphael: The Staff of Armadyll!?
Faust: Ha ha ha! No that came into existence only recently but kudos on knowing of its existence. No this weapon was called The Scythe of Truth. Vexxazrin tried to use it, but the other gods discovered his plans. Now a god cannot be truly killed, so their only option was to drain his power and seal him and his army away in another dimension, a ghastly place that consists entirely of pain. Needless to say he escaped centuries ago, but his powers have not yet returned and he.. well he needs a host to survive. I've been keeping a corpse intact for him but we decided he need something more.. permanent. Are you starting to understand?
Raphael: You want me to... to be his host!?
Faust: Shhh, we're almost there, I'll let him explain the rest.

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