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"So, you must be the ones looking for Dante I would think." Frederick said to Spero and Zenovia.
"Listen, Zaros and his forces are outside of your castle and are about to attack. We have no time for silly questions." Zenovia replied to Frederick.
"Exactly. C'mon, we have to tell your comrades!" Spero shouted. Frederick sticks his head out his broken window and hears the name Zamorak beings chanted and it gets louder and louder with every heart beat. He tells Spero and Zenovia to follow him and they tell everybody that Zamorak's forces are coming. Everyone gets out of their rooms and goes to the main hall.
"Zamorak's forces are coming. That's why I called you all out here." Frederick said. Stephanie and Seperadith look at Spero and Zenovia and move their eyes back over to Frederick.
"What are they doing here?" Stephanie asked Frederick.
"Where the hell do you get off !? If it weren't for me and Spero, you all would be burning right now!" Zenovia shouted
"Listen, we can-" Frederick tried his best to calm down everyone but it was to no use.
"Maybe you should try to learn a bit more before going after Dante!! He still might-" Stephanie shouted back
"Don't change the darn subject!" Zenovia interrupted. Jikvald's face expression is extremely angry.
"Shut the hell up!" Jikvald shouted. Stephanie and Zenovia quiet down but still gave each other glares. Jikvald looks at Stephanie then moves his head over to Zenovia, still maintaining his angry face expression."We are in the middle of a attack and you two are acting like two immature children. That's something we don't need.". Frederick shakes his head up and down and agrees with Jikvald. Everyone calms down and quietly awaits their enemy.
"Is everyone ready?" Reid asked.
"Yeah." everyone replies.
The End of the Prologue.
Next Chapter,
Chapter 1: The Dance in the Flames
Thank you for reading, I appreciate it
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"Listen, Zaros and his forces are outside of your castle and are about to attack. We have no time for silly questions." Zenovia replied to Frederick.
"Exactly. C'mon, we have to tell your comrades!" Spero shouted. Frederick sticks his head out his broken window and hears the name Zamorak beings chanted and it gets louder and louder with every heart beat. He tells Spero and Zenovia to follow him and they tell everybody that Zamorak's forces are coming. Everyone gets out of their rooms and goes to the main hall.
"Zamorak's forces are coming. That's why I called you all out here." Frederick said. Stephanie and Seperadith look at Spero and Zenovia and move their eyes back over to Frederick.
"What are they doing here?" Stephanie asked Frederick.
"Where the hell do you get off !? If it weren't for me and Spero, you all would be burning right now!" Zenovia shouted
"Listen, we can-" Frederick tried his best to calm down everyone but it was to no use.
"Maybe you should try to learn a bit more before going after Dante!! He still might-" Stephanie shouted back
"Don't change the darn subject!" Zenovia interrupted. Jikvald's face expression is extremely angry.
"Shut the hell up!" Jikvald shouted. Stephanie and Zenovia quiet down but still gave each other glares. Jikvald looks at Stephanie then moves his head over to Zenovia, still maintaining his angry face expression."We are in the middle of a attack and you two are acting like two immature children. That's something we don't need.". Frederick shakes his head up and down and agrees with Jikvald. Everyone calms down and quietly awaits their enemy.
"Is everyone ready?" Reid asked.
"Yeah." everyone replies.
The End of the Prologue.
Next Chapter,
Chapter 1: The Dance in the Flames
Thank you for reading, I appreciate it
.
The end
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the beginning...
17-Nov-2008 15:13:45 - Last edited on 20-Nov-2008 22:44:10 by Serene End
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17-Nov-2008 15:16:26
Yay first comment on part 2! Alot of new characters, and plenty of villains this time around (mwahahahaha, victory will be ours, only it won't be because good always wins
) With the addition of another S character (Seperadith, Stephanie, Spero, and Sarah) it's only a matter of time before they combine to form: Super S the Avenger lv 487.2! Who will the final S character be?! Does this have any relation to the actual story!? Only time will tell!
Oh and Zamorak was an underling of Zaros but Zaros was "killed" by Zamorak pre-godwar and now he's appeared in the chapter, did you mean Zamorak or Iban or is this intentional?
Raphael Quotes (from now on I'm gonna give a wee bit of backstory for him every post):
(Raphael lies in a pool of blood, countless arrows sticking out from his back)
Faust: Right this way Vexxazrin. Yes he'll make a prime candidate. No they're completely destroyed, it will take months for me to mend them. Yes he'll fly again. If you inhabit him now it might be fatal. Yes sir just a bit longer. Of course, I'll begin immediately, Mephistopheles grab the body, we have to leave before more soldiers arrive. Come little angel, let's get you home.
) With the addition of another S character (Seperadith, Stephanie, Spero, and Sarah) it's only a matter of time before they combine to form: Super S the Avenger lv 487.2! Who will the final S character be?! Does this have any relation to the actual story!? Only time will tell!
Oh and Zamorak was an underling of Zaros but Zaros was "killed" by Zamorak pre-godwar and now he's appeared in the chapter, did you mean Zamorak or Iban or is this intentional?
Raphael Quotes (from now on I'm gonna give a wee bit of backstory for him every post):
(Raphael lies in a pool of blood, countless arrows sticking out from his back)
Faust: Right this way Vexxazrin. Yes he'll make a prime candidate. No they're completely destroyed, it will take months for me to mend them. Yes he'll fly again. If you inhabit him now it might be fatal. Yes sir just a bit longer. Of course, I'll begin immediately, Mephistopheles grab the body, we have to leave before more soldiers arrive. Come little angel, let's get you home.
18-Nov-2008 04:08:56
Thanks guys. I have no time to edit or do anything regarding editing >****; but it'll be edited soon enough.
Ark, there might be another S character. Who knows! There might be Super S Group
Wigwam, don't worry. It won't get too crowded.
EDIT: About "ZoMG! There so many characters!" The protagonists needed to be restocked. After all, most of the protagonists had either left or died. Ivan was killed and Dante is gone soooo a few more characters needed to get added. Of course, more baddies needed to be added due to the fact that the bio characters are mostly made of protagonists. More baddies were added just to keep the balance of characters up.
2nd EDIT: Ark, like I've said before. I know that, this story is pure fantasy. Nothing follows the real story, I'm just following wherever the heck my brain tells me to go.
Ark, there might be another S character. Who knows! There might be Super S Group
Wigwam, don't worry. It won't get too crowded.
EDIT: About "ZoMG! There so many characters!" The protagonists needed to be restocked. After all, most of the protagonists had either left or died. Ivan was killed and Dante is gone soooo a few more characters needed to get added. Of course, more baddies needed to be added due to the fact that the bio characters are mostly made of protagonists. More baddies were added just to keep the balance of characters up.
2nd EDIT: Ark, like I've said before. I know that, this story is pure fantasy. Nothing follows the real story, I'm just following wherever the heck my brain tells me to go.
The end
is only
the beginning...
18-Nov-2008 19:48:42 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:23:49 by Serene End
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