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Chapter 1: The Dance in the Flames
Meanwhile, a young woman walks down a path nearby Falador and looks at a map. "Hmmm..I've searched everywhere." The young woman mumbled to herself. Her eyes scan the paper for the next location she'll look. "Hmmm...Lumbridge sounds good. Maybe Seperadith will be there." The woman began to walk to Lumbridge. Meanwhile, a little north of Lumbridge, a man with gilded armour and blue eyes cannot believe what he is seeing. A shadow of smoke and fire covers the skies of Lumbridge. He ran there as fast as he could. "Lord Saradomin was right. Lumbridge is being attacked, I must get there quickly." The man said to himself as he ran to Lumbridge.
Back at the castle, a huge battle is taken place, bodies covering everywhere. Spero fights Zaros, Frederick fights off Alfred, Seperadith fights off Ravinius, the others fight off a army of Zamorakian Assassins. "What's the matter Rebel Trash!? Can't fight?" Zaros mocked as Spero was overpowered by the seemingly stronger God. Jikvald jumps in-front of Zaros while Reid charges at Zaros' back and they both slash Zaros, Jikvald's blade slashes Zaros' right shoulder while Reid's Battleaxe cuts Zaros' left shoulder. Zaros kneels on the ground in a grin of pain. Some Zamorakian Assassins charge at the two, Jikvald slashes his sword at the necks of the assassins that after him and beheads them all. Reid throws his axe at the head of a assassin and impales his head and runs to grab his axe back, he tackles all the assassins away from him and grabs his axe from the corpse of the assassin and slashes his axe at both the assassins and cut their necks.
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21-Nov-2008 17:26:38 - Last edited on 23-Nov-2008 01:48:09 by Serene End

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The man in gilded armour arrives "Sweet, more backup." Frederick said as he saw the man walk into the kingdom. Frederick knew he was of Saradomin due to his armour. The man looks at Zaros and Zaros looks at him. "Zaros, Solider of Zamorak." The man said. "Mercutio Valadrian. General of Saradomin's Elite Army." Zaros replied. Zaros stands back onto his feet and looks at Mercutio. He points his staff towards Mercutio's neck despite how much pain he's feeling. Mercutio swings his sword and cuts Zaros' staff in half and points his sword at Zaros' throat.
Mercutio's giant gilded sword glitters a shining light from the fire that burns 6 yards away from him. "Are you ready to accept your fate, Zaros?" Mercutio said to Zaros. "Not in a million years!" Zaros shouted as he swung a spare sword he kept in his backpocket. Mercutio barely blocks the attack, the only damage done was just a small, not very deep cut on Mercutio's right cheek. It bleeds a little but Mercutio wipes it off. "Hmm..I see. You're as tricky as ever, Zaros." Mercutio said. Suddenly, it rained, a very dark cloud of mist covered the area. It was too thick to see through, nobody could see.
"What on earth is this?!" Zaros shouted
"I can't see!" A Zamorakian Assassin cried
"Yeah. What the heck is this?!" Another Zamorakian Assassin shouted. 2 Zamorakian Assassins get shot in the head with a emerald bolt. A kid, seeming the age of 14 shoots anything she sees.
"This is going to be too easy. Couldn't Lord Bellerophon give us a better task?" The child asked the man next to her.
"This is a very important task. You'll kill the greatest threat to our master." The man replied
"If you say so." The child shoots another Zamorakian Assassin in the head. The other assassins start to panic.
"Who's there!? Why do you blanket us with this mist!? Show yourselves!" Spero shouted
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21-Nov-2008 17:31:20 - Last edited on 19-Dec-2008 13:06:08 by Serene End

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"Don't worry Spero, I wouldn't kill you. Lord Bellerophon will deal with you himself. He promised and he never lies." The child said
"Lord...Bellerophon.." Stephanie mumbled
"Where are you!?" Seperadith shouted
"Am I allowed to kill that guy?" The child asked the man next to her and she pointed.
"Lord Bellerophon said you're allowed to kill anyone but Spero." The man replied
"Oooo! How fun!" The child smiled as she shot many bolts to many Zamorakian Assassins, she attempted to shoot Ravinius but he jumped out of the way. The child shot a bolt at Stephanie, she just barely misses getting killed but her left shoulder is shot. She kneels on the ground and grimace in pain. The child shot a bolt at Seperadith but he blocks it with his Saradomin Sword.
"Show yourself!" Frederick shouted.
"Hey Thanatos." The child said.
"Yes Julia?" Thanatos asked
"Why don't you go have fun killing these people?"
"Is that what you want? You are a higher rank in The Army of the Altais than me therefore you can command me when Lord Bellerophon is not present. Do you want me to fight?"
"Yeah! It'll be more fun for both of us! I can't wait to hear them scream!" Thanatos pulls out his Dragon Daggers and jumps into the misty area. "Everybody! Stay on alert!" Reid shouted. "Yes, do your absolute best to not make a sound and listen to your surroundings." Mercutio shouted. Thanatos sees Jikvald and surprises Jikvald by jumping on top of him and thrusts both of his Dragon Daggers at Jikvald's throat. Before Thanatos kills Jikvald, Stephanie hears the attack and a arrow is shot at Thanatos' upper back. He drops his Dragon Daggers and Jikvald kicks Thanatos off him with a lot of force.
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21-Nov-2008 17:34:21 - Last edited on 23-Nov-2008 15:27:39 by Serene End

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Jikvald jumps back onto his feet and looks over at where the arrow was shot and hears Stephanie calling out Jikvald's name and asking if he's alright. "That was a nice shot Stephanie, thanks." Jikvald shouted. "Whew...thought I missed." Stephanie sighed a sigh of relief. Jikvald quickly turns his head over to Thanatos, Thanatos throws a black throwing knife at Jikvald. He gets Jikvald's left leg but nevertheless Jikvald charges at Thanatos and swings his sword to the left but Thanatos leaps so high that he dodges the blade and passes overhead of Jikvald. Jikvald quickly turns his head and Thanatos punches him the face so hard that it stuns Jikvald for a moment, Thanatos quickly punches Jikvald's lower back and quickly pushes the black dagger in Jikvald's left leg deeper. Jikvald grimace in pain, he swings his sword and goes after Thanatos' neck. He blocks the blade with his left forearm, the blade doesn't go through due to Thanatos' rough, strong Dziban skin.
"Do you really believe that worthless piece of scrap metal you call a blade is going to go through me?" Thanatos asked Jikvald. Jikvald pulls all of his strength to try to cut through but couldn't. Thanatos grabs Jikvald's left wrist and throws him out the window, Jikvald crashes through the window and hits his back on a dead tree and lays unconscious. Thanatos turns his attention to another prey, and jumps around looking for somebody else. The others stand apprehensive but ready for anything after hearing Jikvald get thrown out the window. "What on earth is going on!?" Zaros shouted. Thanatos and Julia begin to hear something. "Thanatos, Julia. It's time to return. Something has come to my intention and I need your help. Come back to the castle." The voice said. "Yes, my lord." Julia and Thanatos said as they disappeared. The mist disappears with them, everybody looks back at their enemies. "It seems like your outnumbered." Spero said.
The end
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the beginning...

21-Nov-2008 17:37:36 - Last edited on 23-Nov-2008 15:27:16 by Serene End

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"Retreat. We have other things to do." Zaros commanded. "As you wish.." Ravinius said. Zaros, Ravinius, and Alfred disappear; the battle was over, for now. Everybody lowers their weapons and a feeling fills the air. Everyone left the room to find Jikvald and they found him pretty messed up. They quickly bring him in and patch him up. He wakes up a hour later, Frederick looks over at Jikvald as he sits up.
"Your awake, that's good." Frederick smiled. Jikvald looks at Frederick.
"How long have I been out?" he asked
"About an hour or so." Jikvald sighs and lays back down and rests. Everybody does their best to look for survivors under the clouded sky of smoke in the ruins of a once beloved city. After hours of searching, they managed to only find one survivor but many dead bodies. A boy was found, probably around the age of 14 the others thought. "Hey kid. Are you alright? You don't need to fear us, we're of The Rebel Army of Lumbridge." Stephanie tried to calm the boy down. "Yeah, I know." The boy replied. He seemed to be without fear of Stephanie or the others.
"So, what do we do now? We only have one survivor and the rest are all dead." Spero said
"When in doubt, use your head." Mercutio replied
"Let me guess. Saradomin teach you that saying?"
"Yes. He normally says it to calm down his soldiers when in a moment of panic.".
"Hey kid. What's your name? I'm Stephanie." Stephanie greeted herself to the child.
"I'm Nero." he introduced himself.
"Nice to meet you Nero."
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Meanwhile, at Zamorak's castle. Zamorak quietly sits on his throne and waits for a report back from Zaros. Zaros enters the room, Zamorak's eyes follow Zaros as he walked into the room. Zaros kneels onto the ground and bows, Zamorak looks at the Zaros and quietly awaits his report.
"What sort of information have you returned to me? I'm in a bad mood so it better be good news." Zamorak growled
"Mighty Lord Zamorak. Neither me nor my army could not destroy The Rebel Army of Lumbridge but there is a reason to this." Zaros said
"It better be a GOOD reason. If it isn't, there will be consequences."
"I am aware of the consequences. It seemed like The Army of the Altais' Thanatos Dunamis and Julia Peiran interfered with our plans sir." Zamorak closes his eyes and leans back on his throne chair and thinks, he makes a loud "Hmmmm..." sound as he thinks. He opens his eyes and leans forward in his chair. "I don't buy it." Zamorak said. He cletches his left fist and fire shoots from under Zaros, he screams in pain. "Will you be able to catch or kill Spero the next time!!?" Zamorak roared. Zaros slowly shakes his head up and down, Zamorak releases his left hand and the fire disappears. Zaros fell on the ground and slowly got back into the bowing position.
"This is your last chance Zaros. Finish this mission, and you will be back on my "I'm not going to kill you" side. However, if you fail. Death will come under the flames of my rage. Be aware of this." Zamorak said.
"Yes my lord." Zaros replied.
"Very good. Now begone." Zaros walks out of the room.
The End of Chapter 1
Next Chapter,
Chapter 2: The Unbalanced God
Thank you again for reading, I appreciate it ^_^ .
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21-Nov-2008 17:44:43 - Last edited on 23-Nov-2008 01:47:37 by Serene End

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Never fear your ever vigilant editor is here!
"What's a matter Rebel Trash!? Can't fight?" should say "the" instead of "a" however your way just makes him look a little cockney and could be intentional.
"on the ground in a grin of pain" again this could have been intentional but I think you meant "grimace of pain" (It currently looks like he enjoys the pain)
"Your as tricky as ever, Zaros" wrong "your" should have been "You're".
It should say "Neither me nor my army" instead of "Me or my army"
"This going to be too easy" needs to be "This is going to be too easy"
"She kneels to the ground and grins in pain" again it should be grimaces in pain
"Jikvald grins in pain" wow they really love getting hurt don't they lol, should be grimace again
"Thanatos turns his intention" should be turns his attention
Raphael quotes:
This is such a long post that he Raphael quote has to be on a separate post

22-Nov-2008 17:28:19 - Last edited on 23-Nov-2008 05:17:02 by Ark Von Doom

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