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First Chapter of 2009
Chapter 10: Fearful Attack (Tenth Chapter
)
P.S: To Ark, this is the chapter you wanted. Though this may not be the way you wanted, I tried my best. Please forgive me if I didn't get it right.
The snow continued to fall from the dark clouds covering the sky above. Mercutio walks outside and begins to think to himself. On the other side of the castle, Frederick looks outside from his room's window. He lets out a sigh and downs his head to continue writing down on a book with all the pages being blank. "What is going to happen? *sigh* If only I can see into the future." Frederick said to himself. He begins to hear very quiet footstep noises crunching the snow from outside. Frederick looks outside and sees nothing. He shrugs his shoulders and looks back at his book and continues to write with his quill. Back with Mercutio, he looks at the sky and sighs. He hears very faint footsteps and he grabs the handle of his gilded blade and shuffles his eyes left and right. The footsteps got louder and louder, he turns around and swings his sword to the left and kills a Zamorakian Assassin. A group of 20 circle around Mercutio with their weapons drawn.
"I would suggest you throw down your weapon General Mercutio." A voice said. Mercutio looks behind him and sees Zaros was the one who said those words.
"Zaros!?" Mercutio growled. Zaros crosses his arms.
"I'm sure that the old man Saradomin did not train you to be a fool Mercutio. Either throw down your weapon and no one will get hurt or you can go for the hard way and you will get hurt. Because trust me, there are more assassins around than you think."
Chapter 10: Fearful Attack (Tenth Chapter
)
P.S: To Ark, this is the chapter you wanted. Though this may not be the way you wanted, I tried my best. Please forgive me if I didn't get it right.
The snow continued to fall from the dark clouds covering the sky above. Mercutio walks outside and begins to think to himself. On the other side of the castle, Frederick looks outside from his room's window. He lets out a sigh and downs his head to continue writing down on a book with all the pages being blank. "What is going to happen? *sigh* If only I can see into the future." Frederick said to himself. He begins to hear very quiet footstep noises crunching the snow from outside. Frederick looks outside and sees nothing. He shrugs his shoulders and looks back at his book and continues to write with his quill. Back with Mercutio, he looks at the sky and sighs. He hears very faint footsteps and he grabs the handle of his gilded blade and shuffles his eyes left and right. The footsteps got louder and louder, he turns around and swings his sword to the left and kills a Zamorakian Assassin. A group of 20 circle around Mercutio with their weapons drawn.
"I would suggest you throw down your weapon General Mercutio." A voice said. Mercutio looks behind him and sees Zaros was the one who said those words.
"Zaros!?" Mercutio growled. Zaros crosses his arms.
"I'm sure that the old man Saradomin did not train you to be a fool Mercutio. Either throw down your weapon and no one will get hurt or you can go for the hard way and you will get hurt. Because trust me, there are more assassins around than you think."
The end
is only
the beginning...
03-Jan-2009 16:10:25 - Last edited on 03-Jan-2009 16:51:21 by Serene End
He peeks from the far right side of the building and sees Ravinius killing a friend of his. Spiro grins his teeth in anger and shoots the spell at him. Ravinius glowed green for a moment and he began to see as if he were the one who he just killed. He kneels down after a feeling an overwhelming pain in his chest and began to feel this strange sadness. A Zamorakian Knight runs over to Ravinius with much worry. "Are you alright, sir?" The knight asked. Ravinius stands up and pushes the knight out of the way and kills another person and again he sees a vision as if he were the one killed and he felt an overwhelming pain in his throat and this strange feeling of sadness took him over. Memories of the fallen person began to quickly flashback in Ravinius' mind with all those memories burning at the end and the final words of the victim said "Goodbye my once beloved life..."
Meanwhile, back at camp. The Zamorakian torturemaster casts a spell to make Mercutio sees the massacre as if he were there. Mercutio's eyes were widen with Iban laughing as he watched the torturemaster's work in progress. Back at the massacre, with every kill; Ravinus continued to get the same feelings. An unbelievable pain at where he struck the final blow to the victim, an overwhelming feeling of sadness and sorrow, memories of the victim flowing in his head, the final words echoed in Ravinius' head, and the vision of the victim's view right after Ravinius killed them. After the massacre, Ravinius hid in his tent and began to think about what had happened during that massacre, his hands began to shake uncontrollably. He looks at his hands with his eyes widened.
"What is happening to me?!" Ravinius mumbled to himself.
The End of Chapter 10
Next Chapter,
Chapter 11: Repent
Thank you for reading, I appreciate it
.
Meanwhile, back at camp. The Zamorakian torturemaster casts a spell to make Mercutio sees the massacre as if he were there. Mercutio's eyes were widen with Iban laughing as he watched the torturemaster's work in progress. Back at the massacre, with every kill; Ravinus continued to get the same feelings. An unbelievable pain at where he struck the final blow to the victim, an overwhelming feeling of sadness and sorrow, memories of the victim flowing in his head, the final words echoed in Ravinius' head, and the vision of the victim's view right after Ravinius killed them. After the massacre, Ravinius hid in his tent and began to think about what had happened during that massacre, his hands began to shake uncontrollably. He looks at his hands with his eyes widened.
"What is happening to me?!" Ravinius mumbled to himself.
The End of Chapter 10
Next Chapter,
Chapter 11: Repent
Thank you for reading, I appreciate it
.
The end
is only
the beginning...
03-Jan-2009 16:44:00 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:37:23 by Serene End
Here's Arky! I just got back from (undisclosed location) via my (undisclosed vehicle) and I'm happy to report that (undisclosed events) went well.
The first Christmas present I received was a positive comment from Mod Mark (Lead Runescape designer) on my quest series!!! Since it was recently announced that they would be searching the forums or new ideas this year, it makes me think my idea might be put in runescape
!!!!!!!
(I'm excited!!!)
And I read both the Holiday special and the Two chapters I missed and found very few errors
Though that may just be from me drinking too much eggnog... either way great job :p
Spiro was Spero's father... which means Spiro's father made Ravinius repent! Awesome. Also, Zaros was killed
Poor fellow; he has it pretty hard for an evil god :p
Here are the two errors I noticed right away, if I see more after the eggnog wears off I'll be sure to tell you :p
"But first. I have a mission for you." Strange period after "But first", either use a comma or just leave a space.
"You're not replying my father as Lord Zamorak" Weird grammar, perhaps you meant "calling my father Lord Zamorak"?
Raphael has managed to escape the Bahamas with only 200 million casualties and 300 destroyed gundams, an acceptable loss. In light of the holidays here's a special (if late) Christmas Raphael Quotes:
Faust: *Hic* And I says to her, that's no kebbit, that's my wife!
Raphael: Faust, why are you talking to the tree?
Faust: Is that who this is? Alas eggnog you *Hic* have wronged me yet again!
Raphael: What exactly is the appeal of this eggnog stuff?
Faust: You mean you've never had *Hic*?
Raphael: I tend to avoid things that smell like sulfur...
Faust: Cmon have a swig, it's the holidays!
Raphael: I suppose it couldn't hurt...
1 hour later
Faust and Raphael: Five onion rings!
Four spotted kebbits
Three short noobs
Two penguin spies
And some eggnog in a tree!
The first Christmas present I received was a positive comment from Mod Mark (Lead Runescape designer) on my quest series!!! Since it was recently announced that they would be searching the forums or new ideas this year, it makes me think my idea might be put in runescape
!!!!!!!
(I'm excited!!!)
And I read both the Holiday special and the Two chapters I missed and found very few errors
Though that may just be from me drinking too much eggnog... either way great job :p
Spiro was Spero's father... which means Spiro's father made Ravinius repent! Awesome. Also, Zaros was killed
Poor fellow; he has it pretty hard for an evil god :p
Here are the two errors I noticed right away, if I see more after the eggnog wears off I'll be sure to tell you :p
"But first. I have a mission for you." Strange period after "But first", either use a comma or just leave a space.
"You're not replying my father as Lord Zamorak" Weird grammar, perhaps you meant "calling my father Lord Zamorak"?
Raphael has managed to escape the Bahamas with only 200 million casualties and 300 destroyed gundams, an acceptable loss. In light of the holidays here's a special (if late) Christmas Raphael Quotes:
Faust: *Hic* And I says to her, that's no kebbit, that's my wife!
Raphael: Faust, why are you talking to the tree?
Faust: Is that who this is? Alas eggnog you *Hic* have wronged me yet again!
Raphael: What exactly is the appeal of this eggnog stuff?
Faust: You mean you've never had *Hic*?
Raphael: I tend to avoid things that smell like sulfur...
Faust: Cmon have a swig, it's the holidays!
Raphael: I suppose it couldn't hurt...
1 hour later
Faust and Raphael: Five onion rings!
Four spotted kebbits
Three short noobs
Two penguin spies
And some eggnog in a tree!
04-Jan-2009 04:01:19
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