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Areno3

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What did I think of the ending? Well... when I read what David said, I smiled. I did not smile because of the words he spoke, but of how you made a circle. You began with those same lines, and you ended it with them as well. I was impressed, and I hope my works become equal to yours one day.

03-Sep-2010 22:43:53 - Last edited on 03-Sep-2010 22:44:16 by Areno3

Englishkid62

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Still, having written this over 2 years ago, it no longer captures my writing at its best, methinks! ^^
You might wanna check out my other story.
Quite a few people believed it's better than this. (Of course, some die-hard Priceless fans didn't think so :P )
And don't worry, you will ;)

03-Sep-2010 22:45:00 - Last edited on 03-Sep-2010 22:45:17 by Englishkid62

Areno3

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I will read Brotherly Love shortly. My stomach is growling so I must find the solution to that problem first off. And I know what you mean by “not capturing your writing at its best.” Everytime I write a story, I feel pressured to rewrite it in a month or two because my writing skills have developed even more, even though only a brief period of time has passed.

03-Sep-2010 22:47:39

Englishkid62

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That's very true! That's one frustrating thing about writing. You just keep getting better and you'll never be able to do your best, really. That of course, stems from the fact that words itself are symbols of certain meanings.
But yeah, do eat. And Brotherly Love is probably going to be a pinnacle of some sort, because the direction I am taking now is actually backwards :P

03-Sep-2010 22:50:17

Areno3

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Well, eating must wait. There is no food in the house, and my father is taking a shower. <.< Anyways, I'm looking forward to reading Brotherly Love because I have two brothers, and I know how complicated the relationship is. ;)

03-Sep-2010 22:52:44

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