Heh. How much is too much, really? If you can find a balance between both, fit in as much (as long as they are relevant) as you can. But I can't tell of course without reading it
Good luck with it though.
Dear all, after four months of constant struggle between doubts, paranoia, inactivity, slacking, hard work and bloodletting, today I call an end to my project, Brotherly Love, which has been completed this afternoon.
I now need to type it all in the computer and redraft it, as well as rereading certain parts and rewriting it. I am still ahead of schedule and we will definitely be having an early release.
Thank you all for your support
Finished it again.
I remember how sad this story was, I'm just glad I know how it ends, because even though this ending is heart-wrenching and amazing it would leave me with a profound emptiness if it didn't end like a fairytale.
I found a few mistakes, oh well, I'm too lazy to point them all out because I can't simply edit them out for you.
It's a thing that makes the reader happy, as opposed to a depressing ending everything turns out alright. It's not very unique (your way of going about it is) but it closes the story nicely.