Honestly, there isn't a lot to do on Into The Fire. No offense, but all I have to write about is to either make Joric stand next to Etheldredda, potentially delivering a pun about either Conleth's arrival or Annie getting angry at Fredic*. And also have Brodus continue the banter between Team Evil, which at this point is pretty much just "Hey, how many bad things have you done this past month?"
Both of those plots feel like they are starting to stagnate. Again, no offense. And there's still nothing on the Ogre Wars.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.
07-Oct-2015 04:13:26
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