Oh, it wasn't abrasive, I have read/listened to vastly worse many times in my life. For example, my best friend frequently uses mockery, name-calling and insults against me, and I'm OK with it.
Interesting character, this Mikazuki seems peculiar (or at least, your interpretation of that is unusual, and remarkable to read and think about).
I see, I sure don't blame you, but you don't have to, say, overthink(?) your own characters. Though, at the same time, if that's the appeal you need, being competitive with yourself has benefits. I tend to be competitive with myself, but never got any results, so I just don't really know how to help you here. Actually, imgur imaging might work!
05-Jul-2017 06:44:14