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NotFishing

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wolfpack 888 said :
Notfishing, I'm not sure yet. Just tried to make it more tribe like. If someone wants to create her to-be husband that's fine if not I'll make him.


The RPer that controls the tribe is allowed to decide the smaller details of the tribe's culture so long as it does not interfere with what has already been stated. So women can lead if you decide it.
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17-Jan-2017 01:43:46 - Last edited on 17-Jan-2017 01:47:02 by NotFishing

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wolfpack 888 said :
Notfishing, do you want me to have my char face the king and control the conversation between the king and Aylin? Or just answer the guard and wait from there? Want to ask before I make my post.


I'd prefer to control the King. I was just thinking that you would have Aylin say something to the guard, then I would have him let you in and the audience would begin.
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17-Jan-2017 01:45:07

wolfpack 888

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NotFishing said :
wolfpack 888 said :
Notfishing, I'm not sure yet. Just tried to make it more tribe like. If someone wants to create her to-be husband that's fine if not I'll make him.


The RPer that controls the tribe is allowed to decide the tribe's culture, so long as the general idea is that they defend the temple at any cost and kill all outsiders.


Ok. I'll create a bio for him shortly. Henia going to be more if the cheif than my other char.

17-Jan-2017 01:45:51

NotFishing

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I just edited it to make the wording a bit more clear.

NotFishing said :
The RPer that controls the tribe is allowed to decide the smaller details of the tribe's culture so long as it does not interfere with what has already been stated. So a woman can lead if you decide it.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

17-Jan-2017 01:47:36

Westenev

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Skills:

"Hunting, knows how to survive in the wilderness"
At 10 years old? What does she hunt, rats? Catching Rabbits and birds with cleverly disguised sneers or fishing could be justified I guess, or even foraging through the assistance of a picture book or accomplice. At the age of 10 though, a girl won't have the strength required to pull (or string) a bow strong enough for real game.

"crafting,"
What does she specialise in? Textiles, Hides, cooking, woodcraft, smithing?

"write, read,"
You take these skills for granted - what languages does she write and read in, and how proficiently has she mastered them?

"spying, espionage,"
A girl in the art of spying and espionage at the age of 10, in it for nobody but herself? It's un-necessary, and frankly, gives me images of ped- well. How did girls get information out of guys?
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17-Jan-2017 01:51:46

NotFishing

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Annie, I would like to point out that the current level of technology is anywhere between ancient era to the middle ages. Most people wouldn't know how to read. Especially when its constantly night outside and every day is a struggle, especially for someone on their own.

Westenev said :
what languages does she write and read in


To be fair, everyone in this thread seems to speak the same language.

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Anyways, I removed the Fleet Bio and replaced it with a simple "Ship Bio." The major factions no longer have their own fleets, but they do have more firepower than anyone else to make up for it. I'm not going to compile a list of ships and facts about them, because that is A LOT of work, and if you're interested in a specific ship you can just look up facts about that particular ship class.

But yeah, the information on the factions are there.

I'm just going to add one thing: the colours of Gara are Red, Sorus is blue, Naris is orange. The ships are painted accordingly.

Azi, if you have space, can you add a brief description of your ship's appearance? If there is no space, just add it on here.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

17-Jan-2017 02:02:28 - Last edited on 17-Jan-2017 02:04:57 by NotFishing

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