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Westenev

Westenev

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Annie, Azi just said...

Azi Demonica said :
Annie, no one cares about Annie Wells' backpack, they don't know and don't care what's inside. However, if the computer inside is still functional, I can add to that, alluding to a much more serious threat than the gangstas or Black Hand, but this will happen after the current mission is complete.

Word of god, perhaps a little out of context, but... O_o

I can wait to open my presents - the question isn't what will happen next, it's what happens now.
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16-Jan-2017 03:25:19 - Last edited on 16-Jan-2017 03:26:38 by Westenev

NotFishing

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Annie1227 said :
Then take care of her wounds and earn her trust. You never know what you will learn from her.

Shouldn't you be trying to earn their trust? You did shoot at them. :P Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

16-Jan-2017 03:30:13 - Last edited on 16-Jan-2017 03:30:39 by NotFishing

Azi Demonica

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Annie1227 said :
You never know what you will learn.

You never elaborated much about the Black Hand, so telling us that Annie is a source of much knowledge doesn't make sense, seeing as I introed the Black Hand, described them, controlled them, managed them, and utilized them in the role-play. You did none of that. If you want us to learn about the Black Hand, you need to describe what they are.

16-Jan-2017 03:34:04

NotFishing

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Annie, if you're having trouble describing the Black Hand:

Ask yourself these questions:
-What is their goal? World Domination? How to they plan to achieve that goal?
-How do they keep organization a secret? Do they have secret bases and meeting points? What makes these places secrets? Do they have passwords or callsigns?
-Do they have friends in high places? Any allies or agents who happen to be in a position to advise or influence the leader of a country?
-Do they always kill to get their way, or would they prefer to blackmail/bribe/persuade people to follow them if possible?
-What weaponry would their agents use?
-Do the agents wear normal clothes to blend in, or do they have an official uniform?

Once you can answer these questions, everyone will have an easier time imagining them in their heads, and it's also a starting point for you to describe them further. Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

16-Jan-2017 03:40:05 - Last edited on 16-Jan-2017 03:41:12 by NotFishing

Westenev

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Truth be told, I've been trying to focus on Alisha's introduction (without much success). My latest attempt has her get dragged into a portal while driving her (admittedly crappy) SUV... though, in practicality, that would probably accidentally frag Lasky's character on her arrival.

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16-Jan-2017 03:43:02

Azi Demonica

Azi Demonica

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Ancient Drew, you mentioned Shalid cuts across the samurai's belly, even though he's wearing full plate armour. You can't slice through a sheet of steel, so I think you may need to edit that a bit. I would suggest Shalid managed to stab into the armpit of the samurai or under the breastplate and into the abdomen, as that's where there's an opening (in most armour).

16-Jan-2017 03:43:25

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