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Inferi

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George Rozas said :
You know, sometimes I don't think you actually read roleplays before you post on them Annie.


Honestly, if you're looking for your "super secret spy" persona as the only way this'll go, I don't think you should use Annie. It just doesn't fit the setting.

Well, that is, unless you want her to be non-magical and already in the world. I'm sure that would accommodate her being all spy-like and whatnot much better.
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13-Jan-2017 00:39:13

wolfpack 888

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Annie, did you read the intro of Koray? Your char history doesn't make sense to me. Your person is an orphan, being raised in modern day earth. She can be adopted, or never told but that should be in her history. Take time and don't rush

13-Jan-2017 00:40:06

NotFishing

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Wolf, how did the Blood Tribe surround Joric's warriors so quickly? My understanding is that they are in a rather large clearing, Joric and his men lined up on one side, and Azi's confused yet alert colonists are on the other. Joric never gave Blake time to finish his speech. The only way the Blood Tribe archers would have time to surround them is if they sprinted, and even then that is a maybe. Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

13-Jan-2017 00:43:45

NotFishing

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George Rozas said :
Annie, you literally changed NOTHING.


Don't you mean 'Star'?

Seriously though, Annie. My advice is to delete the bio altogether, start a new one from scratch using the thread's format, and carefully read over the thread to make sure you understand everything.
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13-Jan-2017 00:54:11 - Last edited on 13-Jan-2017 00:55:09 by NotFishing

NotFishing

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Another issue, Wolf.

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As soon as they arrows made there way down, they already had the next arrows ready to fire.


No offense, but lighting three individual arrows on fire, and then knocking those three arrows into your bow, all without burning yourself or your bow, and then firing those arrows, is extremely difficult and impossible to do before your original arrows hit the ground. Even if they use the torch to light all three arrows at once, they still have to put the torch down before they shoot, which means setting fire to the forest floor. Alternatively, they could douse the torch, but then they would have to relight it.

Additionally, firing three arrows at once is a pretty ineffective strategy as well. Only one arrow would actually fly directly at the target, and all three would only have about a third of the force behind them, which means less distance and less power. I can see why it might be justified in this scenario, since the goal is to rain as many fire arrows as possible down on their opponents regardless of accuracy, but I think it is something worth keeping in mind in the future.

Again, I don't mean any offense by this. It just isn't very realistic.
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13-Jan-2017 00:58:06

Azi Demonica

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About Cradle,

Ancient, is your intro done? Shall I continue from what we have so far, or wait?

The others involved, shall I intro your characters in a dreamworld I feel fits them, or wait for ya'll to do so? As a reminder, we can start another adventure and join them later. I will try to finish Clockwork Chasm quickly with Wolf, then we can get started onto the next all together, too.

13-Jan-2017 00:58:31 - Last edited on 13-Jan-2017 01:00:59 by Azi Demonica

George Rozas

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Annie, you have to use the format provided. Not your own one.

As a side note, I'm doubtful a pair of foster parents are going to teach their kid how to fight with swords and daggers 'for surviving in the wilderness'.
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13-Jan-2017 01:10:59

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