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Azi Demonica

Azi Demonica

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OK, I made a few edits. The concept of the real world and awakening is left without details, as it can become a stronger theme later on. Also added that Fate should be written vaguely, such as in the first- or second-person, so that it will be easier to merge with other features. I want the idea to be rather mysterious, so there is a lack of details for some things, which we can solve as we RP, maybe.

03-Jan-2017 04:38:46

Westenev

Westenev

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Okay. I've just read the posts for broken world, and I found it raised several questions in my mind. At the moment, I'm struggling to come up with a layout for how characters are spread out - so I'll try to describe what I can about what I think.

Outside the trainyard would likely be a small car park or bus yard - something not implicitly described, but I struggle to imagine the black hand walking rank and file down a narrow street like cultists. Given the time, I imagine there would be few cars parked for cover, leading to the black hand having to use nearby house entrances for cover. If the businessmen had the chance to turn around now (without being shot in the back), they could make a break for the train station and jump aboard the oncoming train.

Annie would be just beyond the small carparking area in a row of bushes - but this line of thinking would put her in no man's land, crawling around the car into Anja and the businessman's line of sight with a rather murderous intent. This calls into question - who would spot Annie first, Anja or the businessmen?

I might misunderstand the situation, but depending on how observant the businessmen are, Azi might need to post first.
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04-Jan-2017 02:17:33 - Last edited on 04-Jan-2017 02:19:09 by Westenev

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