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Azi Demonica

Azi Demonica

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tmac attack said :
Please check out "The Maw from Whence they Came" my new short story whenever you can.

I would suggest uploading your story to Wattpad, as this forum is a zombie.



Very good Ancient, nice to see some activity around here. Hopefully, my comments won't kill another thread. Speaking of which, in the past, there were a few times when me commenting caused the user to delete one's work. In Wattpad, I once read a story that was quite hectic, involving an opening chapter, the protagonist wondering about life whilst being a high school student, but instead of going to school, a Minotaur attacked his apartment and charged him, and so he jumps out a window (presumably to save himself), was saved by an angel who caught him before he hit the pavement, he spent several paragraphs describing the beautiful moment, and next chapter was a gay sex scene. When I suggested the author to slow down and take more time, as the scenes were a bit random, the author got mad at me, then deleted his story, then deleted his account. I still feel bad at times, as similar incidents happened a few times in Wattpad and possibly here, too.

02-Nov-2016 04:12:48 - Last edited on 02-Nov-2016 04:13:16 by Azi Demonica

Ancient Drew

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Some people just can't take criticism, it seems. And don't worry, there won't be any gay sex scenes or any random stuff going on. Naval Cataclysm dabbles a bit in lore, but not completely, and there is always the opportunity to add some new races and gods, as well as any histories if you wish. And if you like to see fight scenes and a war over raging red oceans, some of the water catching fire itself, this might be a good one for you. Prepare for hell on RuneScape in Naval Cataclysm!

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02-Nov-2016 06:54:58 - Last edited on 02-Nov-2016 06:57:13 by Ancient Drew

Westenev

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You know, with IcelynexHuman and MahjarattxHuman being compatible, I wonder what other kind of legitimate canon hybrids we can get in Runescape.

We know of several GnomexElf romances, and even an HumanxDwarf ship, but to date we've never seen a hybrid of these races. O_o And ever wonder why Vampires look errily humanlike? :P
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02-Nov-2016 07:53:42 - Last edited on 02-Nov-2016 07:56:40 by Westenev

Ancient Drew

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Well, I wouldn't rule out a fairy hybrid. Bandos made fayrgs after all, and that's something I envisage as him experimenting with his races mating with fairies, possibly for speed or something else.

From what I gather, fayrgs and raurgs are both crossbred from ogres and ourgs. And the names suggest other beasts in their blood.

There have also been hints of Fairy x Dragon cases, and my RP also contains a werewolf who got turned into a vampire by his master, just to humiliate him. Vampires and werewolves are known to have bad blood against each other. There's also scope for an Aviansie/Phoenix hybrid if anyone's interested. :D

Basically, you can do literally whatever you want in terms of hybrids and race choosing, as long as it isn't godmodding and you start off with average power. Then the fun can begin. :)
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02-Nov-2016 10:59:49

Azi Demonica

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You're right Ancient, some people can't handle criticism, but the odd thing is, when I commented of these stories, I wasn't criticizing, I was only commenting while I read the material. I was not saying anything being bad or good; my style of reviewing is basically commenting as I read whilst offering suggestions. Obviously, it's not always taken well, but that's just life. Not that I am the most considerate person in the world, especially when in a bad mood. Speaking of which, Mod Jack has a thread with a link leading to a Christian figure, which is offensive to Christians! Hopefully, Annie won't report Mod Jack. Also, people who post non-fiction here get reported/banned, whereas if a Mod does so, nothing happens, or maybe Mod Jack did post a fictional story?



About hybridization,
This was always a curious topic. Dwarfs, elves, fairies, pixies, gnomes, leprechauns, and whatever else have you, are all basically ephemeral humans, so biologically they should be capable of breeding offspring. If you look at some fantasy works that involve Dark Elves, what if you have a cross with a human and a Dark Elf? Would that make something in-between? They need to have a fantasy game where you get to pick your parents, allowing hybridization.

About werewolves and vampires,
During the Middle Ages, folklore often mentioned vampires being capable of transforming into wolves. Oddly enough, vampires and werewolves are potentially quite similar, save that lycanthropy is a curse, whereas vampirism occurs in a person after death.

02-Nov-2016 18:36:45

Ancient Drew

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I am pleased to announce that Naval Cataclysm is now up and running. :D

People, prepare for war. RuneScape is no longer the peaceful, pretty and safe haven it once was. The real god wars are under way, and every single faction is in the fray. Do you have what it takes to fight your way to the Cursed Archipelago, and do battle with the finest armies that RuneScape and the minds of your fellow RPers, including me, have to offer? Find out in the epic clash at Naval Cataclysm!
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02-Nov-2016 23:06:20 - Last edited on 02-Nov-2016 23:12:04 by Ancient Drew

Westenev

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I began writing a character for Naval Cataclysm, before I realised I have never really written a character who has been built up in story. As such, I opened a window and expelled the hot air, at the cost of returning to a blank page.

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I regret everything.
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03-Nov-2016 06:00:35

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