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NotFishing

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Pink 4 Twink said :
Edited my post on the meeting. I'll take you words to heart, Lasky

Again, you're still making the same mistakes.

First off, you essentially godmodded Sorus into inviting you over for an alliance. How many times do I have to tell you that you can't do that? If you want an alliance with Sorus, talk to me about it or send your own guy. And whatever Sorusian diplomat you end up talking to I will have full control over.

If Sorus invited someone over to discuss an alliance, they wouldn't send you to some stereotypical evil fat noble who gets off on torture. They may believe in human supremacy and have dreams of world domination, but they aren't monsters. That's cartoonishly evil.

Anyways, was sending your guy to Sorus even intentional? You still gave your post 'The Meeting' heading. But the meeting is being held in Dormoor, and Sorus has no presence in it. Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

04-Sep-2015 16:33:56

Venom1383

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Lasky I'm thinking of making that Gnome country border Sorus to the north, so it would be in southern Russia (on the border of Mongolia and also Kazakhstan, which I guess would mean it also borders Adren). They'll be willing to team up with the alliance but will have ulterior motives ("liberating" the conquered kingdoms but also enslaving and looting). The only other country in Russia is Corbonyo's secnd country, which he said is in central/western Russia. Not sure if he borders Sorus.

What would be the upper limit of their population and military? Like maybe 60-80k troops? A bit higher? Ramsay Bolton is the king we deserve.

04-Sep-2015 19:36:15 - Last edited on 04-Sep-2015 20:10:28 by Venom1383

Azigarath

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Angel (page 146),

Actually, my story routes do not need much attention. My best examples are on Wattpad going through retypes. So, Cannibal's Lament, Cold Eyes, The Moth's Wings, The Gothic Wolves,and Hot Tension, are all being put together and reworked into a single setting (excluding the bios of my fans, as those are not my property, though I will probably allude or reference all of them one way or another). This is The Cannibal King on Wattpad only, but I have long since drifted from its production, and at two hundred pages, it is far from over.

Unfortunately, over the past two years, a majority of stories I commented on here discontinued, even though half the time the authors mention they'd keep working on it. Generally, the better thing to do, is to read a story when you have the time, and provide your thoughts in the form of honest reviewing. Try not to post too much or read too much; a maximum of reading ten posts in a single day is good enough, and you can read another max ten posts the next day, and so on. This sure helps to avoid massive bricks of comments!

Note: criticism is when you decree whether something in something is good or bad, and then provide a reason as to why, whereas a review is when you read something and comment as you go. It is better to review than criticize, as it is less likely to feel demanding. Try to work with the author, attempt to help with honesty, examples, ideas, sharing experiences, and so on. Also, try to remember to finish your review by expressing it is all optional, and that the author doesn't need to follow it if the author doesn't want to. Artists must be allowed to work however they feel is best.

04-Sep-2015 20:30:10 - Last edited on 04-Sep-2015 20:32:37 by Azigarath

Azigarath

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Emo Muslim,
I feel as though a thread with vast organization is a bit too much to get through for most people. If you'd prefer a more relaxed form of RP, you may consider checking out my RP thread, which has the option to make short stories within the RP's context. You can also read the bios and use characters from them as long as the prompt says it's ok. You can also post your own bios, settings, locations, and so on, if you want to.

My RP is Hooks and Chains, which I'll bump in a sec.

I'll be gone for most of today, so I might be back tonight, so I may not be able to do much tonight. I also work on weekends, so I am also less active during weekends as a heads-up.

04-Sep-2015 20:43:10

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Like, I said, I'll take your words to heart, maybe it's best that I just delete my post, and just say that Ardithitine ignores the meeting. In the meantime, I'm going to take Zig's advice and take notes. I edited that post before that comment. secondly, how far does this god modding go, I am unfamiliar with the concept. Thirdly. I'm a storyteller, not an experienced RPer, perhaps I need the definition. Fourthly, It takes time for me to learn a new concept, it may take a while to get the whole "no god modding thing down" I'm not stupid, I'm just unintentionally stubborn and make the same mistakes over and over. Once I set my mind to something, I will eventually get it down. Just your friendly neighborhood gay boy! =)

04-Sep-2015 21:58:21

Venom1383

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Pink 4 Twink said :
secondly, how far does this god modding go, I am unfamiliar with the concept. Thirdly. I'm a storyteller, not an experienced RPer, perhaps I need the definition.

You can't control characters that aren't yours. Since you control entire countries in this Roleplay, you can control your country's leaders, soldiers, civilians, etc. But only YOUR country's. You cannot control the actions, thoughts, words, etc. of other players' characters. Ramsay Bolton is the king we deserve.

04-Sep-2015 22:41:31

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