Inferi
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She did look back, since she got shot and was going to respond. Since I wasn't sure, I went with that she did recognize him, but since it seems you don't like that I'll edit it. There's more evidence for not being recognized - since none at all besides "she looked" isn't hard to top - anyways.
Right, offending line removed and replaced with something more sensical.
You didn't actually have to change it. I was just wondering if there was something about that scene that I was mis-remembering. If you prefer to keep it in, you can.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.
Chasers, do you wanna go ahead and assume our characters on Fish's thread know each other, or would you rather play out a meeting?
And also I need to post but I'm feeling very much not creative right now. So maybe after enjoying a bowl of ice cream I will, and if not, I may just need sleep. I was up hella late last night, haha.
NotFishing
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You didn't actually have to change it. I was just wondering if there was something about that scene that I was mis-remembering. If you prefer to keep it in, you can.
I most certainly would, so I'll go change it again.
Just call me Annie.
No, seriously, I should be ashamed of myself.
But I'm not.
Meh, I guess I kinda am.
Like I said, there's arguments for both sides. If you want to read over the scene again (it starts on page 15, I believe) and see if you really think it shouldn't be there, go ahead and let me know. I'll save both variations of it so that I don't have to type it again regardless of which way it goes.
Done in by the dubious doings of destiny.
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Inferi
Bluefirecan
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Chasers, do you wanna go ahead and assume our characters on Fish's thread know each other, or would you rather play out a meeting?
I'm cool with whatevs. What are we thinking; old high school friends? Someone that Mina served at the diner and they became chummy? Same apartment complex? Both went with Peter Pan on a mystical journey?
Chasers115
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Bluefirecan
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Chasers, do you wanna go ahead and assume our characters on Fish's thread know each other, or would you rather play out a meeting?
I'm cool with whatevs. What are we thinking; old high school friends? Someone that Mina served at the diner and they became chummy? Same apartment complex? Both went with Peter Pan on a mystical journey?
I'm good with any of those. Although I particularly enjoy the
Peter Pan one
one about us meeting at the diner. It could be like, my character came in somewhat upset and yours ended up getting an unintentional emotional dump and didn't immediately dismiss it. Or something like that? Otherwise I could just be a regular customer and we just befriended each other.