Annie, your post is OK, but the reason why I said Annie would only have time investigating one set of items was because, in regards to the suitcase, I described that it was beeping inside. I like how you mention Annie puts the documents into the suitcase, which makes perfect sense, but the "suitcase" was planned to either be a computer or a bomb, hence why I described it beeping once Annie went into the room.
You kinda went a bit too far too quickly, but oh well, that's my fault for not planning ahead better. I will change the suitcase from being a computer to
carrying
either a computer or a bomb. I will flip a coin to decree what happens: if it lands heads, it's a computer, if tails, it's a bomb.
But, as Inferi said, you need to just stick with your decisions and keep going. For the RP to be more dynamic and exciting, some details, plans and actions are hidden from the users, but decided beforehand. I will perhaps try to have more clues to foreshadow the future.
West, your post is OK in BW too.
18-Jul-2016 05:13:33
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Azi Demonica
