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Thank you all for your votes! I will be making more improvements here soon!
Feliz
Feliz
31-Dec-2009 20:40:43
I am still around just dealing with some "stuff" see ya all soon with updates and improvements!
Feliz
Feliz
16-Jan-2010 08:41:25
It's time for my one line per entry review
That cat is a jerk.
Confused yet pleased.
"The voices, the dark, the icy sea, all filled her with doubt that she would be in time to save him, but fearlessly she faced what would come. "
^I really like that line for some reason.
That frog was hungry, but it could have shared
Lila accidentally lead to Guthix pulling a reset. Whoops.
Oh and she wasn't pleased about it
The followup to this one will be amusing.
There are no orphanages. Poor Ormbsy needs a hug.
Boomer had guts but not enough brains. Poor thing.
Hahaha, I remember laughing at this when I first read it
I repeat that Butterfly is my favourite <3
I can understand why you like your piece for the word, it is very good.
I laughed at the end of the rack as well. Excellent twist.
Hahahaha, poor wolf. I really really like the style you do those poems in.
Lord Wyrick is going to be in trouble shortly hahahaha
Arithmetic saves the day again!
Okay, wow, you and Terra make an exceptional team. That was good. Twisty, but good.
I think incalescence works better in this case.
~~~
Of course your entire work is spectacular, and I've enjoyed reading it. Keep me updated if there's any more.
That cat is a jerk.
Confused yet pleased.
"The voices, the dark, the icy sea, all filled her with doubt that she would be in time to save him, but fearlessly she faced what would come. "
^I really like that line for some reason.
That frog was hungry, but it could have shared
Lila accidentally lead to Guthix pulling a reset. Whoops.
Oh and she wasn't pleased about it
The followup to this one will be amusing.
There are no orphanages. Poor Ormbsy needs a hug.
Boomer had guts but not enough brains. Poor thing.
Hahaha, I remember laughing at this when I first read it
I repeat that Butterfly is my favourite <3
I can understand why you like your piece for the word, it is very good.
I laughed at the end of the rack as well. Excellent twist.
Hahahaha, poor wolf. I really really like the style you do those poems in.
Lord Wyrick is going to be in trouble shortly hahahaha
Arithmetic saves the day again!
Okay, wow, you and Terra make an exceptional team. That was good. Twisty, but good.
I think incalescence works better in this case.
~~~
Of course your entire work is spectacular, and I've enjoyed reading it. Keep me updated if there's any more.
16-Jan-2010 09:07:49
Thank you, Draken!
You are very kind...
Feliz
You are very kind...
Feliz
19-Jan-2010 22:19:01
Up...poor dusty thread...
Feliz
Feliz
11-Feb-2010 23:56:26
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