Fancy. I think a lot of your readers are "past the kid in a candy store stage".
Anyway, I'm looking forward to perhaps some more primal uses of magic with Rosco, or maybe some more interactions with animals in general.
I'll try and remind Snowman to read this so he can respond to your question. Generally I'll accept bios, but whether or not I'll use them depends on if they fit well with the story. Currently I don't see any thousand year old half demon half elf with eighteen swords and a massive kill spell under his belt as fitting in the story. I have much better things planned =P
mate this story is absolutely well drawn so far and I hope u put more chapters in soon very well done and looking forward to reading more, also may supply a bio or two
BIOS =)
Name Jeros Strife
Age 20
gender quite obviously male lol
aperance blond straight hair ice blue eyes, dressed in black armless tight muscle shirt, black trousers also skintight, black boots highankled.
weapon broadsoard 2h with strange insignia of a long forgotten house....mysterious ^.o
attitude quiet with a dry sardonic wit
short...kinda long history lol
grew up in care of widowed aunt in fally. became a promising squire but fought a duel with the guards captain's son and killed him. he was forced to flee for his life at age 17. He became a mercenary in ardounge where corruption abounds and is looking for his place and purpose in life.
Hope u can use this character
oh and if u can't please let me know so I can do something with him so he isn't wasted lol
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I agree with snow's idea that Rosco should introduce a more primitive side to magic, increasing Tash's overall effectivness with it's uses.....just a thought lol
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