RuneScape Forum Archive | In Bad Company

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Then someone caught --->Kargills<--- eye.
Correction: Then someone caught Kargill's eye.
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--->Hey, that was my beer!<--- a drunk who had been sitting at the table yelled at the elf.
Correction: “Hey, that was my beer!” a drunk who had been sitting at the table yelled at the elf.
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He tried to punch Kargill, only to have the elf duck under the --->mans<--- arm and deliver a quick punch into his nose, the bridge of which snapped audibly under the blow.
Correction: He tried to punch Kargill, only to have the elf duck under the man's arm and deliver a quick punch into his nose, the bridge of which snapped audibly under the blow.
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One of the --->drunks<--- friends picked up a bar stool and then hurled it at Kargill.
Correction: One of the drunk's friends picked up a bar stool and then hurled it at Kargill.
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He pulled out his staff and smashed in under the --->mans<--- chin, and then stabbed it into his gut.
Correction: He pulled out his staff and smashed in under the man's chin, and then stabbed it into his gut.
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--->I just ordered a free round to everybody in bar. Would you like to go in and order your free drink?<--- Without missing a beat, the drunk staggered out of his chair and hobbled over to the door.
Correction: “I just ordered a free round to everybody in bar. Would you like to go in and order your free drink?” Without missing a beat, the drunk staggered out of his chair and hobbled over to the door.
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11-Jun-2008 21:31:54

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Kargill sheathed his sword and covered the --->mans<--- eyes and mouth. Magic began to flow through his hands and into --->Rathors<--- body.
Correction: Kargill sheathed his sword and covered the man's eyes and mouth. Magic began to flow through his hands and into Rathor's body.
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He then surged ice magic through the man, completely freezing and clogging the --->mans<--- blood steam.
Correction: He then surged ice magic through the man, completely freezing and clogging the man's blood steam.
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"Excuse me Commander, but how is this Falador’s or the White Knight’s problem?” Roven asked. “I agree with you that the Underground must be stopped, but aren’t the Black Arm and the Phoenix gangs --->Varrok’s<--- problem, not ours? We could be using our man power for much more productive reasons, like eliminating the Black Knights.”
Correction: "Excuse me Commander, but how is this Falador’s or the White Knight’s problem?” Roven asked. “I agree with you that the Underground must be stopped, but aren’t the Black Arm and the Phoenix gangs Varrock’s problem, not ours? We could be using our man power for much more productive reasons, like eliminating the Black Knights.”
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“You better watch your mouth,” Lorad replied with a very serious tone. "All of you in here will be leaving for --->Varrok<--- within the next few weeks.
Correction: “You better watch your mouth,” Lorad replied with a very serious tone. "All of you in here will be leaving for Varrock within the next few weeks.
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“If I may ask, why am I going over to --->Varrok<---?”
Correction: “If I may ask, why am I going over to Varrock?”
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11-Jun-2008 21:32:59

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“I desperately need a mage of your caliber over there. While interrogating Garth we were able to determine that the mage who had enchanted his dagger is in --->Varrok<---, and we assume the mage to be a part of the Underground.”
Correction: “I desperately need a mage of your caliber over there. While interrogating Garth we were able to determine that the mage who had enchanted his dagger is in Varrock, and we assume the mage to be a part of the Underground.”
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“I need to know more about the Kingpin and the Underground’s operations in --->Varrok<---,” replied Kane.
Correction: “I need to know more about the Kingpin and the Underground’s operations in Varrock,” replied Kane.
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“Well there is not much to say. The Underground is trying to expand its reach of crime to --->Varrok<--- as well as the rest of Runescape. I have no idea where they are actually located in -->Varrok<--- though. As for the Kingpin, he has been very uneasy lately.”
Correction: “Well there is not much to say. The Underground is trying to expand its reach of crime to Varrock as well as the rest of Runescape. I have no idea where they are actually located in Varrock though. As for the Kingpin, he has been very uneasy lately.”
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“Kargill, ever since you arrived from the West five years ago you have been deeply troubled and tortured by nightmares. We can not help you unless you are willing --->do<--- talk to us.”
Correction: “Kargill, ever since you arrived from the West five years ago you have been deeply troubled and tortured by nightmares. We can not help you unless you are willing to talk to us.”
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If Garth had believed in God he would have no doubt been praying to him right --->know<---.
Correction: If Garth had believed in God he would have no doubt been praying to him right now.

11-Jun-2008 21:33:54