Hey Elite! It's been a while ever since I read this, and so I re-read it, and of course, loved it. Here are some mistakes I've found.
The arrows point at the mistake.
“I hope --->your<--- right. I'll see you tomorrow?"
Correction: "I hope you're right. I'll see you tommorrow?"
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“What is that?” --->rhe<--- barbarian asked Kargill. “Did you just insult me?”
Correction: “What is that?” the barbarian asked Kargill. “Did you just insult me?”
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You got a spacing issue on this one.
It was a common myth that you could cure yourself of intoxication by dipping your --->bodyin<--- water, but Garth did not believe it.
Corrrection: It was a common myth that you could cure yourself of intoxication by dipping your body in water, but Garth did not believe it.
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"Apparently not. He was found unconcious along with the two of you. You must have weakened him --->eneough<--- that his wounds got the best of him. Anyway, so far the interrogation has gone by smoothly. We did not get him to talk but our mages did manage do invade his mind and take that information by force."
Correction: "Apparently not. He was found unconcious along with the two of you. You must have weakened him enough that his wounds got the best of him. Anyway, so far the interrogation has gone by smoothly. We did not get him to talk but our mages did manage do invade his mind and take that information by force."
11-Jun-2008 21:30:59
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