Very nice. Well written, with quite a few plot twists. I'm still not clear on the place that Anastasia went to with the Karamthulus and zombie-natives, but aside from that, you tied everything up at the end. Well done.
-K
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I am working on a new story, the problem is, it's just bigger and more complex than anything I've tried before. So with that in mind, you can't blame me for being paranoid about trying to make sure everything is how I want it before posting.