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hey roshy.
Srry u had to miss me but i have to go to school
Anyway, Im feeling very poetic so i might go rhyming off
Uh oh here comes one....
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Im sailing away
set an open course for the vergency
cause ive got to be free
free to face a life thats ahead of me
On board im the captain so climb abaurd
well search for tommarrow
on every shore
and well try bless that we can
to carry on
Thats it for now but ill be back with more later
From Lukie

05-May-2007 02:45:50

Ive added on summer's but it may be too gory for u or idk
But this isent the best gory part in the story, im planning on making one of the best war scenes ive ever thought of with blood every sentence!

From Lukie

05-May-2007 16:26:24

05-May-2007 16:29:29

Lol, Roshi i wonder what kinda horror storie you can come up with. Bet it'll be good

06-May-2007 07:03:34

lol luke.. isnt that like on south park?

06-May-2007 07:19:33

06-May-2007 11:12:30

Wow, very nice. Finally I got round to finishing it. The only thing I have a problem with is that I don't think Bec would leave straight after being told her father might be dead. Surely she would wait and hope. However, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

06-May-2007 11:29:37

GLad you enjoyed it
And she wasn't actually leaving anywhere, she was just going out for a walk to be alone. I always go walking alone when I'm afraid of hearing bad news.

06-May-2007 11:33:29

Oh, okay, I must have missed that.

06-May-2007 11:39:28

06-May-2007 11:52:53