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Im not gonna be on till friday night so can u bump my story for me please? Thx
O and when ur doing fighting scenesm, make it gorry
For example
and this isn't a suggestion)
" As I got up from the ground, I could feel the massive pain in my arm. I looked over at it and it was gushing blood. It was also all the way off. I yelled a blood-curdling scream and ran in pure anger at my attacker. He was in a daze in how i recovered and with the bloody edge of my sword, I **** through his middle, right in half. He gurgled as blood spurt through his mouth and he lay in a bloody pool, dead."
thx
~* If I had a carrot for everytime I herd that, I would be a very fat rabbit!*~
O and when ur doing fighting scenesm, make it gorry
For example
and this isn't a suggestion)
" As I got up from the ground, I could feel the massive pain in my arm. I looked over at it and it was gushing blood. It was also all the way off. I yelled a blood-curdling scream and ran in pure anger at my attacker. He was in a daze in how i recovered and with the bloody edge of my sword, I **** through his middle, right in half. He gurgled as blood spurt through his mouth and he lay in a bloody pool, dead."
thx
~* If I had a carrot for everytime I herd that, I would be a very fat rabbit!*~
17-Apr-2007 01:06:10