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swaggy420lor

swaggy420lor

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Ok, I'll say this, it was a great scene. You used great description and explained all of the emotions perfectly. One of the best fight scenes in first person I've ever seen. I've never been that good at reviewing, so this is my short review.

19-Apr-2007 00:30:03

Mister Tigg

Mister Tigg

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That was totaly awesome!! I dont care what anybody else says! I saw it perfectly in my minds eye and felt some of his pain. but i was kinda dissapointed when there was no more to read lol. anyway i love it, all of it
<Finish The Fight>

19-Apr-2007 04:07:49

Rune Woolf
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Rune Woolf

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Hehe, i'm back Roshi! and thanks GREATLY for bumping my story while I was away :D :D
I was planning on reading any adds, but it seems I've run outta time ---gotta go to soccer trainin' lol
I'll read it tomorrow, first thing :D
Thanks again Roshi!

19-Apr-2007 06:56:49

Roshinda

Roshinda

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Thanks Bane and Badboy :) It's nice to get good feedback on something you don't think you did that great on.
If it's coherant and you can see the fight in your mind, then mission accoplished.
No worries Wolf, and your welcome for the bumps.

19-Apr-2007 07:48:32

Roshinda

Roshinda

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Thanks Jband. I know it was short, I apologise. I was too busy yesterday getting an onyx, but I got one.
Dream, This should be finished by the end of the month, I hope. But slave driver that you are, it may take a bit longer now ;)
NAh, the ending is getting close. I think. In theory anyway. When I write it it may take longer than I forsee though.

19-Apr-2007 22:49:32

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