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Thanks Siig
I'm going to try to finish this story within a month, 2 at most. It's not going to be very long when I finish it though, perhaps 20-30 posts.
This is my best story, my other is Journeys, then I have a Selection of Shorts. Also, I have 3 contest entry threads, which eventually I'll add to my short story thread.
A Woeful Surprise
A Pilot's Plight
and Heart of Ice

09-Apr-2007 02:58:21

Wonderful add, Roshie. The only error I found was on your latest add, paragraph 5.
"It it becomes obvious that we are no longer welcome, we pick up and leave."
I believe you meant to say, 'if it' and not, 'it it'.
Back to skilling on my other account.

09-Apr-2007 03:23:43

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09-Apr-2007 03:26:12 - Last edited on 09-Apr-2007 03:26:19 by [#F3XNMC5MJ]

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09-Apr-2007 03:31:39

Good add on
I like how you made me a missionary cause it goes with my religion

09-Apr-2007 03:38:23

09-Apr-2007 03:43:42

Special bump. Sorry about the spamming that pushed the thread down.

09-Apr-2007 03:59:05