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I couldn't tell you what genre it is either, I can never tell with my writing.
If all goes well, you can expect my writing to stay at the same quality, so I hope you enjoy following this story to its conclusion.

09-Apr-2007 01:37:02

[#9PE5KKJ52]

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This is being narrated by a man, right?
Make it more brutish.

Partially JKing. Great so far.

:D
I don't know why I'm giving YOU advice, but eh...

09-Apr-2007 02:18:12

Roshinda

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Well a boy, but yes.
I know his voice isn't quite right, which is mostly what I'm having trouble with. Because he's a loner though, and kind of shy, I don't want to make him too ... I can't think of the word I'm thinking of... macho I guess.

09-Apr-2007 02:22:39

[#80N8R0VWZ]

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Hey Rosh, I read this piece of yours

Magnificent work, truly. I loved it

Was a bit let down by the shortness of it, but I guess that's to be expected from new stories

I was wondering if you could give me a list of your stories? Major boredom is setting in for me, but it seems the stories here really help

09-Apr-2007 02:54:58

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