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Roshinda

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Well, I have half an add... this is taking a while lol.

15-Apr-2007 11:02:00

Infinity A8

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Well you can't rush greatness ^_^

15-Apr-2007 11:33:55

Roshinda

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Add up!

15-Apr-2007 12:00:06

[#0SFNE5HCE]

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The one problem is that some of the blows weren't described too well. It was still quite captivating, though, and I'm still excited about what the ending might be.

15-Apr-2007 12:05:22

Roshinda

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Fight scenes are my big weakness. If you can help me describe them better, it would help greatly.
That pitiful excerpt took me all evening to write XD

15-Apr-2007 12:09:30

[#Y7TCW7FBM]

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It was actually a pretty good fight seen. only one thing I found about it that wasn't very good was when you said "My fist connected to his jaw." You could change it somehow so it isent so....wimpy as I might call it.

15-Apr-2007 19:57:09