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No, you've actually pulled it off quite well. You've made it quite realistic so far. Most authors would have the main character inflict a heavy wound, and then the opponent would survive from it anyway. However, you have put in a more minor injury to the opponent, and yet still have made him feel the right amount of pain one would feel.
I'll keep an eye out for the rest of the battle-scene, and I'll see if I can find things wrong with that. You are putting a good deal of effort into them, so there shouldn't be too many bad points.

15-Apr-2007 10:21:41

Roshinda

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Thanks Funkeh.
You have no idea how much effort I am putting into this, though I'm not getting much out lol.
I find fight scenes so difficult to write, but I'm glad you think it's realistic so far, that's what I'm going for. Unrealistic fights are ok for hero characters, but not ordinary people.

15-Apr-2007 10:27:46

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