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Roshinda

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Lol, I like it.

09-Apr-2007 12:03:47

[#0SFNE5HCE]

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Nice add, I found one mistake while reading.
"I strolled towards the limp animal and picked it up by -->it's<-- hind legs."
Should be 'its'. 'It' doesn't take an apostraphe in the possessive case.

09-Apr-2007 12:14:31

Roshinda

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Thanks for pointing that out. I know better, but I catch myself doing that more often than not. Thanks for catching it.

09-Apr-2007 12:30:14

[#0SFNE5HCE]

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No problem. I do it sometimes as well by accident.

09-Apr-2007 12:32:59

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09-Apr-2007 12:34:14

Roshinda

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Thank you Genzen

(I don't know what to call you, I hope that's acceptable)

09-Apr-2007 12:35:54

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09-Apr-2007 12:39:08

Roshinda

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Genzen Han just seemed to long and impersonal, but I didn't exactly want to shorten it and give you a nickname you might not appreciate.

09-Apr-2007 12:41:18

[#D8UKJ82XD]

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that was realy good lots of people say that my stories arent good when i read this you realy put hard wok into it!

09-Apr-2007 12:50:58

[#D8UKJ82XD]

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i mean hard work lol

09-Apr-2007 12:51:25

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