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So I've noticed. I like her though. ^^ And I'm not bad either.

07-Apr-2007 10:34:12

*Jumps up and down* Where do they sell the t-shirts for your story??

07-Apr-2007 10:55:45

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07-Apr-2007 11:15:11

*Pounds down key*
MORE!

07-Apr-2007 11:18:15

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07-Apr-2007 11:29:06

Top job so far rosh. Hanging for the more

07-Apr-2007 11:44:39

Hey Aussie
Bron got you to read it did she? lol.
I'm glad you're liking it

07-Apr-2007 11:45:31

From just breezing through the Prologue, I think that your male voice is alright, but it sounds a bit like a female talking. Somehow, you need to re-arrange words in a rougher way that makes it sound less sweet. Don't ask me how to do that, though.
Apart from that, your writing style is excellent .

07-Apr-2007 11:50:59